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Penny Wishes
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Dedicated, affectionately,
to my dearest first grade pals,
Mary Opfer-Lepovich
and the late James Milligan.
BFF

              Penny Wishes

                    by Brenda Joy Dobson

From an early age

she was told to wish upon stars,

yet, none of the wishes came true ,

like a grand trip to Disneyland,

or for lilac bush switches to break

while they stung her legs

during homework time,

or that she could learn arithmetic in a hurry.

She wished for more real friends,

like Mary Opfer and Jimmy Milligan,

who didn't mess with her on the playground,

She wished for kinder teachers

who didn't criticize so much...

the little stuff that mattered most,

and the big stuff, too, like for her

brothers and sisters  to come from afar

to love her.

As she strolled through life, wishing upon stars,

picking up "face up" copper pennies,

she learned "knights" were often

love-impaired,

full of deception, void of emotions,

narcistic, sometimes cruel...

till one day, at her worst,

she traded her bag of pennies for Reality,

and began to wear like iron.

bjd

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Penny Wishes"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 23, 2010
Harsh but real; this is a thought-inciting write, Brynn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 23, 2010
THERE COMES A DAY WHEN WE REALIZE THAT EVERYTHING WE HAVE BEEN ALLOWED TO EXPERIENCE IN LIFE WERE ALL THE SO NECESSARY...DONNING US WITH THE 'SUIT' OF ARMOR THE WOULD BE NEEDED TO SURVIVE IN THIS WORLD. WE ARE THE TYPE OF POETS WE ARE TODAY BECAUSE OF ALL WE WENT THROUGH YESTERDAY. IF, THOUGH WE MAY NEVER KNOW WHO UNTIL WE REACH OTHER SHORES, WE DON'T TOUCH BUT ONE LIFE FOR THE BETTER THEN...WE'VE DONE OUR 'TRUE' JOB. NOW I DON'T KNOW ABOUT YOU, BUT I HAVE FINALLY COME TO THE POINT WHERE I WOULDN'T CHANGE A THING...MOLD ME LORD, USE ME...AS YOU SEE FIT. A POWERFUL WORK ABOUT LEAVING 'CHILDISH' THINGS BEHIND AND BE EMBRACING REALITY. I LOVE IT! YOU DON'T HAVE TO WAIT TO FIND OUT ABOUT THIS ONE WHOM YOU'RE WORKED HAS TOUCHED ME TIME AFTER TIME...TAKING ME BACK TO WHERE I WANT TO GO AND DON'T WANT TO GO...MAKING IT ALL GOOD. I AM GRATEFUL FOR YOU BRENN, YOU ARE MY KIND OF POET. MAY GOD CONTINUE TO INSPIRE YOU AS YOU SHARE YOUR GIFT.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on January 22, 2010
I can relate to this, makes me think of my recent poem, "The Others," about the realities that come with growing up. The important thing is to keep a bit of wonder of childhood tucked away forever. Blessings, Michelle xx


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