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Decrescendo
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Going, going-gone... bjd

                       Decrescendo

                                 by Brenda Joy Dobson

You don't have to worry about me "dishing" on you,

Writing your "swan song" for rich royalties, too.

When we crossed paths, it was fine for awhile

When you slipped quietly away,

I, vented with gracefulness and style.

Though I'd become your confidant,

sounding-board, platonic Friend,

Stood by you, "starry, puppy-eyed" all the way till the end.

You hadn't realized I was the one you could trust,

Not revealing your sins,

Dragging your name through the dust.

Like a "mission impossible,"

You kept bumping your head,

Consuming day-dreams like candy,

Avoiding love, neglect often fed.

You might be missing me, "sumtimes,"

I miss you a little bit, too,

But, as life breezes by on most days,

There's nothing left, between us, to do.

Blue-music notes go rifting on air,

Like "windtalkers" drifting on high,

Carried by time's metronome,

Staccato's, unmelodious good-bye.

bjd

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Decrescendo"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
Carried by time's metronome,
Staccato's, unmelodious good-bye

nicely developed poem ... enjoyed

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 4, 2010
WE, AS WOMEN, ARE USUALLY VERY SENSITIVE AND FRAGILE WHEN A RELATIONSHIP GOES BEYOND THE PLATONIC POINT...WE BECOME EMOTIONAL AND FIND IT HARD TO END THIS KIND OF AFFAIR. SO, THIS WELL DONE WORK DOESN'T PULL AT MY HEART STRINGS AT ALL...JUST HIGHLIGHTS THE FACT THAT SOMEONE LOST A GOOD FRIEND, WHOM THEY DID NOT APPRECIATE AND WHOM THEY OBVIOUSLY...DID NOT DESERVE. YOU'VE SAID IT WELL...JUST THE WAY IT SHOULD GO. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
Bittersweet and honestly soul-stirring with meaningful sentiments expressed. Nicely done, Brenda. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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