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I am building my afterlife before
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Style and vision and sense of reality is what it takes to be a builder in poetry.
You have to be a infrarealistic craftsman to build your demonical-angelic way in this Hell-of-a-world!

Two warm grains in the eyes of the titmouse

We stretch our hands and flap-flap: is gone

The branch shivers

In its place

 

Look here

I’m building my afterlife before

My branch shivers too

But I am home I am always here

Dressed just in myself like the sword of Toledo

 

Although is almost September with fruits gone to warmer countries

 

I think I’ll take autumn and throw it to the ground

And then I’ll pretend to vegetate

 

Of course

 

I’ll be watching

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "I am building my afterlife before"
Reviewed by George Asztalos
Reviewed on December 18, 2015
Michelle sorry for being late with the answer but beter later than never right? Look: what is intriguing is that any of the poets are building their afterlife before death and the outcome is that poets are watching in their afterlife and can be brought alive anitime by reading and refeeling their poems. Just like trees in the fall they seem death but still alive, watching. The titmouse that flyes from their branches is the poetry with his shivering warm eyes. Well, thanks for your thoughts and see you arround dear :)

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on January 8, 2010
Strong images here and bold thoughts make this poem very intriguing. I especially like the titmouse and autumn lines.


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