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The Dusty Lunchbox
by Daniel S. McTaggart → (All Poetry by Daniel S. McTaggart)
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I've learned to slow down on the road
so the world beside me
does not pass by
with watercolor blur

I've learned it's okay to stop
and let the energy
trickled away by travel
fill up again to the brim

When I'm weary of lashing wind
I take little known exits
down gravel covered lanes
and park where the dust settles

The small establishment next to me
has a splintered sign
smoothed by sun-filled gusts of grit
and it reads "The Dusty Lunchbox"

The main part of the restaurant
is the body of an old railroad car
the leftover carcass
of a forgotten ghost train

The musty air inside
is tanged with the palate of burgers
sizzling on an iron grill popping
like the sound of lips smacking

I shuffle down the aisle
like a passenger
the walls papered with banners
from faraway stations

A waitress stops by my booth
and hands me a menu
her round cheeks wine-stained
by a warm smile

Her strawberry hair
flecked with auburn and grey
sparkles dancing in amber beams
sliding through window blinds

My lunch arrives on a blue plate
a cheeseburger with lettuce
and a thick slice of tomato
held together with a toothpick

Not an ordinary toothpick
but one with a colored strip
of plastic tied in a bow
like I've won first prize at the fair

As I bite through layers
of red, yellow, and green
my tongue is simultaneously
seared and soothed

Juices spill onto my plate
that I sop with my home-cut fries
gulping sweetened iced tea
with a slice of lemon on the rim

I leave a hefty tip
beneath the empty, beaded glass
and pause by the door
for another wine-stained smile

Instead of racing down the road
I find myself ambling
in part because I feel restrained
by newfound strings

A part of me stayed behind
to remember how happy I was there
next time I pass by he'll tug those strings
and I will be happy again

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 Reviews of "The Dusty Lunchbox"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Broad, narrowing, specific, very specific, gorgeously-so-clear-you-can-see-it-too writing, then summing. --fabulous. I love it. I could just taste that tomato... --Charlie

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 18, 2004
I really like the images you create. The water color blur is great. Nicely done.

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
Nicely done!

Reviewed on June 17, 2004
OK you just told what I love to do when traveling. Get off the super highway and find that real relaxing old piece of America and just sit relax and enjoy. Many times traveling I pass an exit and my mind remembers a place like this and tugs for me to stop but saddly many times just can't.
Most enjoyable and refreshing to read here.
Tommy

Reviewed by Marjorie Coogle (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
Beautiful. We have a place like this in my little town. A place that is too quaint for everyone except a few regulars.
Marjorie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
What a super descriptive imagining here, MP. I found myself drawn in just by the title, and then I could not stop reading once I could feel the joy of this journey...working on the road daily brings me the inability to "slow down", always in a hurry, always rushing to get around the next bend...never getting anywhere...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
You made a memory that day, Mountain Poet, and allowed it
to become a legacy. Wonderful...

There is a restaurant like that in our town...callled Boxcar Billie's...and it is quite popular.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
This is one of the best writes.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Excellent indeed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Excellent write

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
I concur with Jim and Robert Jude. Great expression. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
Robert is correct. This is very nice.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
wonderful ambience to this poem ... excellent! ...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
My dear MP.. in the utterly peaceful, lingering atmosphere of this personal journey, I found that door you always leave ajar for me to slip through... you bring me along... worlds of simplicity and self-discovery that number many, now, for you've brought me to so many places... "I've learned to slow down on the road" ... for me, that's my invitation to catch up... to come with you and be there too. No one does this like you, dear friend. I love these wanderings... katydid xox.

Reviewed on June 14, 2004
This was excellent, absolutely outstanding imagery in this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
I've learned to slow down on the road

You've learned a great lesson; and this is a great poem.


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