Justice Lost (poem) by Huda Orfali on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 5, 2006

This is a poem, filled with so much truth, yet pain and yet one has to love it! At least we did, you two are a great team, creating the most beautiful poetry,
B&R

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Justice is not for the squimish...BUT It is THE BATTLE for all who believe that JUSTICE IS for ALL. The Voice of the writing is to battle and make war on the unjust. Corruption of the world is the collective thoughts of the corruption in the hearts of those who "lead" the world. Unfortunately in this day and age, the people of the world are being lead by their own ignorance of the truth into destruction by evil hearts in evil beings.

LOVE is the weapon of the warriors in this battle. And to you braveheart, LOVE is the truth. Be well sweet poets. Your words are an ointment of JOY to those who are hurting and a trumpet call to those who are sleeping.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on May 24, 2006

You both are on a roll...I have truly enjoyed the depth of this work from you two...well done.

~Peace and Blessings to you both~

Allen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 24, 2006

Sadly, it seems it has always been thus in this world and sadly too, I don't see much change. A most compelling offering. Thank you for sharing it Huda. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 24, 2006

Beauty and corruption are seamlessly woven in this contrapuntal write. Your collaborations breathe easily as two sides of a coin coming together most naturally and your expression of duallism is always finely tuned and honed. I have no idea which of you wrote what lines. You are a perfect blend of style and voicing. And your chosen messages are always superb and delicately articulated with femininity, grace, and yet also with a hypertensile strength. You make the ideal poetic dance partnership! A potent and poignant poem, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 24, 2006

So apropo as I think of what is happening in Danfur and Sudan and elsewhere where man's inhumanity to man exists. Well done to both of you.

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2006

I�m a woman slaughtered

In the name of honor

A child sold to become a soldier

Or a slave for pleasure

This is the most honest and powerful depiction of our unjust world

You two are the true sound of peace and freedom in our world

God bless you both, Huda and peter

Michael

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Wonderful collaboration of work!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

profoundly introspective assessment of an unjust world ... i wonder, is there such a thing as justice or is simply our judgement
of the way things are and the way they are not ... either way, excellent write ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

I agree with Jay! This is awesome poetry! Exceptional collaboration! Blessings to you both!

Love
eT

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Beautifully sad but true write on the complexities that the violent world we live in which seems to be getting worst not better. All we can do is hope and pray.

Felix

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Sold. Sold-ier.
Chilling, moreso because this is a real depiction of todays sorry world. Masterfully written, you guys..

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Huda & peter, the imagery is stunningly beautiful.. Yes please keep writing these wonderful masterpieces to heal and inspire this world to heal..

(((Love & Prayers, Dove )))