I've never hurt my feet like that, but have hurt my back!
You did a superb job of conveying the impact pain had on you.
Enjoyed the way you ryhmed in such a meaningful way.
I look forward Cheryl to reading more of your writing. :)
-a friend and fellow poet, Zach
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2007
I feel your pain. You did an excellent job of capturing the pain as well as the self-made prison it created through lack of mobility and loss of freedom.
You did a superb job of conveying the impact pain had on you.
Enjoyed the way you ryhmed in such a meaningful way.
I look forward Cheryl to reading more of your writing. :)
-a friend and fellow poet, Zach