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to a Mahatma
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'great soul'


To a Mahatma, "great soul"..


on the road of defeat

pushed deeper pulled defeated sad


your eyes stared through the greyness

and saw it all


your deep eyes stared through the fog

and saw the love within the wall


... gentle gentle soul

sublime life affirming our buried dreams

by your payment we are saved to make you pay


but you pay and without hate stand


in the hall of defeat you stand

where cows dance a jig you stand

where betrayal
is progress

and power
is the bigger gun...

you stand and sing the dream

..

by your payment we are saved to make you pay

t'is your payment that saves us ... just!


to make YOU pay

but you pay and without hate stand

in the hall of defeat you stand

in the graveyard of trampled flowers your eyes die

.....in a gentle kiss








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 Reviews of "to a Mahatma"
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
This is very astute. You see with clear eyes.

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2003
Superb !!"where betrayal is progress
and power is the bigger gun...
you stand and sing the dream " so many this is for,so many who have come and sung through all adversity.You are a fine writer of the soul my friend


Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
...the more I read you the more am I aware of the profoundness of a kindred connection..Ty for your soul,mind and heart...
Shimmering light write...
Vesna

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Profound as ever.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2003
Very Good Tarek!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2003
"...To a Mahatma, "great soul"..
on the road of defeat
pushed deeper pulled defeated sad
your eyes stared through the greyness
and saw it all..."

great lines....

Reviewed on May 27, 2003
good write, tarek! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2003
Some pay to play and some play and others pay their way, but in the end, the balance sheet reads, "All debts cancelled due to bankruptcy."


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