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Voices In My Head
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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*Thank you so much Eileen Waldron and Daniela Violin for helping me get it spaced correctly!*

There are voices in my head:

Can't you hear them, too?

These cruel and vicious voices

That pinch and cloud my view.



Quarrelsome lurks, waiting,

For a chance to steal my words,

To start an asinine battle

Over a matter that's quite absurd.



Anger throws a heavy veil

Over all the other sounds,

To ensure that in my raging words

No forgiveness can be found.



There are voices in my head:

Can't you hear them, too?

These sweet and dreamy voices

Who express my love to you.



The silken voice of Writing,

Spilling words from mind to ink,

That I might attempt to explain

The ways I often think.



Dream's quiet imagery

Helps me along the way,

Calming the sleep I seek by night

Leaving just a trace by day.



There are voices in my head:

Can't you hear them, too?

These cold and heartless voices

That speak nothing which is true .



Memory lies waiting there,

Pictures burned into my mind,

That every time I close my eyes

I dread what I may find.



The hateful sounds of Terror

Bring me to a wave of tears,

Unreasonable doubts and pain

All doubled by my fear.



There are voices in my head:

Can't you hear them, too?

These unshakeable little voices

That I can't explain to you.



Love makes my head spin

And echoes within my heart,

Assuring me that forever

Won't see us torn apart.



Yet Depression fights a battle

Against all that lies inside,

Forcing me to run, retreat

And at least attempt to hide.



There are voices in my head:

Can't you hear them, too?

These contradicting voices

That shadow all I do.


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 Reviews of "Voices In My Head"
Reviewed by Sissi Blaise (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
gggreat job sar beautiful write! <3

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2003
I also hear voices so I know exactly what you mean.

Adam

Reviewed by a a (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Awesome! I don't understand it. But it's beautiful

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
Well done imagery, and expression, rhyme and rhythm...
(right click on your mouse and it has a what to do pop-up)

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
That was wonderful. Great rhyme and great manipulation of words. Just brilliant.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by a- maryllis
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
Awesome write Sara... to make it into poem form type <br> before every line and inbetween stanzas :)

Reviewed by Courtnie
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
hey sara, i think this is one of you're BEST yet i really really like it a lot! and thats saying a lot seeing as i usually have something to say to correct but i dont its really good i love the theme and everything too! good job!


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