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The Better Part of Me ( 9/11/006) repost
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I don't know what to do
I can't see through these eyes
She helped the child grow
to the man you see outside

I lost it all on Tuesday
now I hold our child
In her eyes I see
the better part of me

She still walks these halls
Her clothes are all still here
When I close my eyes
her scent whispers in the air

We had so many dreams
All shattered on that day
When I wake tomorrow
it won't go away

I watched it on the news
I saw the fiery crash
When the buildings fell
I tried to disbelieve
All that was lost
meant everything to me

Have you seen her face?
Please
take a look and see
I don't think
I can take this pain
Without
the better part of me





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I wrote this in dedication to all those who lost loved ones. After five long years the pain and loss from that tragedy still remains in our hearts. May God finally heal us as a nation.
God Bless America!
Tim

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Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on November 17, 2006
Wonderful poem. I doubt if the pain will ever go. Bless you Joyce

Reviewed on September 15, 2003
(((((TIM)))))

o, this grips the heart and squeezes out tears

powerful, powerful, beautiful tribute (it's going into my library)

((((((HUGS)))))) and love,

karla. :( *tears tears tears*

Reviewed on September 12, 2002
A great tribute poem, so final and so sad..its for me all very hard to accept it sometimes..all the pain and the loss...I shall never forget that black Tuesday and all that we've lost forever.God will heal our land and get us through somehow!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on September 11, 2002
Hugs ands Blessings to you this is such a masterpiece that it touches the soul!

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on September 11, 2002
Wow:What a beautiful tribute.I would like to know if I can use this poem as part of my collection.Please let me know by emailing me directly at ashacreations.hotmail.com.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2002
Wonderful friend .. did a great work ... Loved it ... Keep it up

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2002
Brilliant tribute Tim..

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
I cannot express in words how
beautiful this is! It is
truly awesome. I am in tears.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
Great tribute, Tim.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
Tim, you have a good heart

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
Such a fitting and superb remembrance...bravo!

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
Tim,
Awesome piece!! Thank you for sharing it with us.

God Bless,
The Voice

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
A very eloquent tribute

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
I can see why this is your favourite one, Tim.. It's a beautiful tribute...
(((hugs)))
Jenni

Reviewed by Nancy
Reviewed on September 10, 2002
Beautiful tribute to all. So much feeling in what you wrote.
Nancy


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