Mindy's Favorite Room (Short Story) - 6/25/2006 10:27:18 AM
I Think this is a delightful loving story between daughter and dad. And how romance and passion bloomed into a lonely dad who found a relationship with the daughter's friend from school. You're an excellent writer in every detail and have a great depth of romance. Great job! Jennifer
Mindy's Favorite Room (Short Story) - 6/24/2006 4:39:49 AM
Hi Elaine:
The story was well-told and has many layers.
The first half of the story seems to have geared toward very young children; but then the second half is for much much more matured children, so I think you'll need to do some adjustments in this story - whether to gear towards the much younger children, or the much older children.
Please note that this is how I feel (just my own personal humble opinion) when reading this story, you can either take my suggestions or leave it.
Thank you so much for inviting me to read the story. It's an honor that you think so highly of my reviews. I will now go to read your other stories.
Thank you!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
