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The Way-part 8- A Round Peg in a Round Square
by Richard J Kallao
Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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As her journey of Rite begun Dvenon watched Frisse she still reacted to meeting a brother she never had and Dvenon hoped she'd could in fact stay focussed on her Rite .' So how do I know what to do or what tasks must be done ? ' Dvenon turned and shook her head .

' It will don't worry remember I cannot help you .' Frisse grab her pouch , reached for her tiny canteen drinking some water then to  putting it back as she too walked ahead of Dvenon she'd tried too hide her expression about how she still felt abiout Dyin .

' What is that ? ' she asked as they'd both stopped . The ground before them moved slowly and Dvenon wanted to say something but knew she couldn't .She watched Frisse . Frisse studied the ground and reach for a stick using the stick she then touch that same ground and let go . She in fact studied the ground as the stick slowly started to sink .

' Quicksand .' She turned too Dvenon she then  only silently nodded too her . ' Very good Frisse you passed your first test .' But suddenly Frisse lost her balance and she fell in .

' Dvenon help .'

to be continued

 

 

 

 

 

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