Read it, loved it. The description, characterization was wonderful for such a short work. The love scene was sweet and hot. Lovely work. I hope you will take it out of doc file form and post it here.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone
2/18/2007
I love stories with open endings for they cause the reader to use their own thoughts to create new beginnings. Lady J
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge
2/15/2007
Dear H J Cuz, after reading this captivating story, "Song of a Mariner' I couldn't agree more with what George has said. Why is it not here... for more eyes to see and enjoy? You are a very talented writer! I was fascinated with the story!!!!! Well done! You're hired! LOL, LOVE AND BEST WISHES , Holly
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Miguel de Cervantes needed to be throw in jail to write with such elocuence.
The short story becomes a long one in the mind of the reader which uses many minutes flling the spaces between the lines despite the delicate minutia, from the wax sealing of a scroll to the portuguese steel wrapped in virginity.
If you had been a thirteen century bard I envision you in the company of the greats.
As you are living today's century, no bards here that could cross florettes or words with you....yet.
Son of a Mariner is so well written that it is a crime not to put there, more publicly, where everybody can read it.
A beautiful story.
A excellet pen.
Georg
A search for the ghost of a chorus girl chorine haunting a costume designer’s Manhattan apartment leads to an encounter with an eccentric, mischievous witch with the ability to send folks back through time…in this case, the 1919 Ziegfeld Follies.
