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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
7/28/2006 |
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| Yeah, very well done, the conflicting emotions and shaking experiences are portrayed with much sympathy and fun. It makes a very vivid reading. |
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| Reviewed by Ingrid Khola |
7/25/2006 |
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| This story is very much alive, I love the rythm and turns of the tale. Well done Sista! |
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| Reviewed by Shoma Mittra |
7/23/2006 |
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| wonderful... |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
7/22/2006 |
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| good emotion and descriptions. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) |
7/22/2006 |
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Sandra:
This episode of boy becoming of age is so well-written. Now yoou've got me sitting here waiting for more...
Wonderfully written four cahpters that is well-worth the time spent in reading!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by Sulubu Tuva |
7/21/2006 |
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| Sandie....You are not setting me up for a major disappointment are you? This is a sexually ambivalent time for the boy. I wish to feel confident about the "kindly eyed" man's intentions. I hate to admit this but I feel quesy. Good build up though. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
7/20/2006 |
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Sandie
You keep a very natural and spontaneous rhythm going in this chapter..
I enjoyed the read treme
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Peter |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
7/20/2006 |
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Sandie, this is a really great chapter, it flows easily along and one is compelled to hug the sweet child and promise to make it right for him. Loved it! Now we are so looking forward to the next chapter! We bet that good things are about to come his way!
B&R |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/20/2006 |
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Excellent write, Sandie; very well done! BRAVA! Keep up the fantastic writing! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons |
7/20/2006 |
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| Still reading and still very much enjoying! I'll be watching for the next chapter. :) Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
7/20/2006 |
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Powerful write here Sandra, I enjoyed this and am looking forward to more of this amazing write
God Bless
Michelle! |
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