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Hottie Chronicles...Part 1
by Walt Hardester
Monday, June 11, 2007

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     First Date
We met online all a twitter. She looked at me, I looked at her. I don't remember exactly who made the first contact. Probably the horn dog in me. Something witty about a smile, I guess.
Since we were close enough to meet without draining my credit card from gas. I said, "How about dinner?" She said , "Sounds like a winner." Maybe I should have said, "How about Mickey Dee's".....but nooooooo. "Walt was out to impress this hottie.
So we went somewhere fashionable, but reasonable, (her choice). "Good for her," I said hoping she wasn't really the trophy woman so many men of my age seek. But... ah she is...so beautiful and full of southern charm, intellengent conversation followed. Before the night was over we were arm in arm, over the table.
She invited me to her "House on the Hill."
Which had been a family farm since forever.
I declined saying something like, not tonight, I have an early day, (which I didn't) I'll call.
With absolutely no intention of doing so....But that smile and charm....I
must admit...I did follow her to the "house on the hill"...but just for a glass of tea and a short tour.

Well, that charm and pretty face just begged me to call tomorrow, and I did. We made a second date...Part two later....LOL

Walt     

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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 6/14/2007
The title itself creates a curiosity that causes the reader to anxiously begin reading...a great opening...great write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/12/2007
I love it, Walt. Great write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/12/2007
The Hottie Chronicles - great title, and a most interesting tale!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/12/2007
VEry good opening act and yes like the others you have me hooked so write the part two and start reeling in.

Fee
Reviewed by Richard Orey 6/11/2007
Like a big fish, I'm hooked. Since the Hottie Chronicles says, "Part 1," and starts out "First Date," either you're leading us all astray or there's gonna be a Part 2 and a Second Date.

Further, I'm assuming "Hottie" is based on more than her hot looks. But maybe not. Since logic says there's gonna be Part 2, I'm thinking this hottie starts warming up.

Now, we all know she's beautiful, has southern charm and makes intelligent conversation, and has demonstrated a willingness to be arm-in-arm, even if over the table. So, now I'm interested in what might be going on under the table on the second date.

My only question at this time is "When?" This affair seems like a mutual admiration society. And though you met "online," that was merely the means of introduction. The "House on the Hill" is not far away. A good storyteller doesn't mention something just to string the crowd along or to throw everyone off. I'm assuming you're thinking about doing some farming, like plowing right in. But when? Tomorrow? Next week? And if you tell us you're gonna wait until the crops are all in, I'll be making moves to get both your hottie bottoms thrown off AD.

Be forewarned: I'm tracking you. Lots of others will be, too. We've got our eyes on you two. Don't let us down. We want details. All the details. I wanna see steam coming off this page. And soon. Hear now?

With lust in your heart and envy in mine, I am
Richard "Hanging on every word" Lee "Don't let me down" Orey.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 6/11/2007
well, could be interesting, yet I think when I read "I declined saying something like, not tonight, I have an early day, (which I didn't) I'll call. With absolutely no intention of doing so. " such a line to think about. Speaks volumes. Lady J
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/11/2007
Good one. Always leave the reader with something to look forward to.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/11/2007
Interesting date...can't wait to see what's next...in part two!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/11/2007
very cute-can't wait to read the next part!

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