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The Pictures
by Chessly Lynn Nesci
Saturday, March 20, 2010

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     Chloe decided to call Mark and find out if he knew anything about the letter and pictures. He started asking her some very personal questions about who she was with, and why? Chloe had to tell the truth about meeting his brother that afternoon. ~Peace~

                    ~The Pictures~

 

 

Chloe almost had sex with the younger brother John when she noticed a man taking pictures. They made eye contact and Chloe yelled; “Hey what are you doing?” The man quickly left the park with some very provocative pictures of Chloe and John. Who was this man, and why was he taking pictures? Several days had passed before Chloe received a mysterious package.  In the package was a letter saying she had to stay away from John and Mark or very bad things would happen to her.

 

 Chloe ripped up the letter and put the pictures in a safe spot in her drawer. Neither brother would want her if they knew the truth.  Maybe the parent’s had something to do with the guy taking pictures? They always found something wrong with every girl they dated.  Chloe was devastated when she was told to stay away from the brothers. She thought for sure she would end up with one of them. Her heart told her to wait for John to come back. She was falling in love with him and knew he felt the same. 

 

Chloe decided to call Mark and find out if he knew anything about the letter and pictures. He was very upset when she started accusing him of something he knew nothing about. He started asking her some very personal questions about who she was with, and why? Chloe had to tell the truth about meeting his brother that afternoon. Mark was furious and told her he never wanted to see her again.

 

 Chloe was so upset and decided to call John for some support. John told her he would come home for the weekend and talk to his parent's. He thought Chloe was lying just to get him home for some more passion. Family drama always got a rise out of both brother’s because they thought about there future. They had to please their parent’s or they wouldn’t receive the large inheritance waiting for them when they married the perfect girl. When John got into town he met Chloe at her house for some long overdue lovemaking.

 

  As soon as he walked in she ripped his pants off and started kissing him in all the right spots. He was so turned on that he didn’t last very long.  Chloe knew exactly what to do to rock his world, and John knew exactly what to do to Chloe to make her scream in delight. When John left he decided to find out some answers. In the past his parent’s threatened other girls so maybe it was them after all. They were very protective of their boys and had to make sure the girls they were dating were pure on the inside as well as the outside.

 

There parent's didn’t trust the women in the past and always found the faults that were hidden by the lust. If the brother’s only knew how very closely they were watched…To be continued

 

                    © Copyright 2010 Chessly Lynn Nesci

 

 

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/21/2010
well said
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 3/20/2010
Building the suspense.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 3/20/2010
A very good story so far. It is easy to follow and it keeps your attention. Hopefully more readers will see how gifted you are.


GOD BLESS YOU and YOUR LOVED.
Tony

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