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The Door part ll:Mirror Unfolded
by Richard J Kallao
Monday, January 20, 2014

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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 Lee finally then ask for a volunteer but one that he would have not like to have volunteers it was his own daughter that volunteered and she then was twenty and wanted eagerly too come with her father then too  it was that or finding a job in the real world And then she called him up one night and told him she had just completed college found a room but she didn't like where it was then and had ask too joined him instead .After saying a prayer and talking with everyone his daughter Adrianna stepped then too  closer to the door,straightening her shirt out and dusting her pants she reach for the door and slowly turning the door knob it opened,the rest of the team in  fact then too  standing behind her suddenly open their mouths to say something,but what they saw no one said a thing . 
 

' Be careful,Adrianna,' said Lee but didn't react,no one did,his daughter then as shocked with awe and confusion as anyone slowly let go of the door knob and suddenly turning she saw what everyone else did,another reality existed in the door,it was a panoramic view at first and it look like a rainbow turned upside down and it had what look like tiny insects flying in and out of it,what they were diung no one could tell. 
 

Adrianna then trying tp using a pair of tweezers reach for a tiny insect and suddenly it whine ,it whine so loud it shatteed then r nearby glass and had everyone covering their ears,suddenly as the insect then started too whine Adrianna started shaking or vobrating then ,suddenly she was slowly pulled into that reality,the door suddenly then closing behind her ,and the door too was suddenly gone .

 Adrianna,'cried Lee then  falling to his knees . After the door vanished Lee had went into shock,the team helped him to a nearby hospital and the team member that was then also too second to Lee in case of such a situation or  circumstance like this happen,took over then the  team and Paul Redman promise Lee that they would do whatever it took to find Adrianna . Paul had almost as much experience as Lee had but he still was only thirty seven which was not what would people call a veteran yet like Lee who was in his late fifties still able to do this kind of job at all. 

 Lee then had had lay strapped to the hospital bed and he felt sick to his stomach,not then because of any illness or anything like that but he hated himself for letting Adrianna go,Lee could not believe she was gone but at least she was the only one that stepped forward when everyone was ask to volunteer and no one else did either except for her . She was after all the bravest one of the lot and he knew that Paul was a good man and he would do everything within his powers to help his daughter .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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