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     Promoting the clip to the film investors from the C.G. McGovern-Bowen Sci-Fi/Action-Adventure novel Evil Seed to film adapted by Sage Sweetwater, a secured franchise intellectual property filming in quadrilogy = trilogy + 1.

Evil Seed: New Jericho, Part 3 (by Sage Sweetwater)

EXT. JERUSALEM ARCHAEOLOGY DIG - DAY

INSERT: Jerusalem

There are several BROWN-SKINNED archaeologists working in a spot where rock walls inside a cave-like atmosphere are surrounding a NARROW CHANNEL OF WATER. There are CRUDE LADDERS leaned against the rock walls the interior backlit by RAYS of DEEP GOLDEN LIGHT.

CLOSE ON -- An ANCIENT MOSAIC MAP unfolded and spread out on a LOW TABLE constructed of FLAT ROCKS.

The archaeology tools are laid out on the ground, some PICKS, AXES, SMALL SHOVELS, PAILS and LONG-HANDLED PUSH BROOMS. There are WHEELBARROWS with chunks of rock in them. The DARK-HAIRED archaeologists are dressed in LONG, DARK TUNICS and WHITE TURBAN CLOTHS draping their heads down to their shoulders. Some are dressed in just regular street clothes with LIGHT STRAW HATS on. Some are bent down on their knees with brushes carefully sweeping away the dirt. One man is pushing a long-handled push broom over the dirt.

There are some RELICS, a pile of COINS, POTTERY and FIGURINES unearthed, roped off and grouped close together lying on an unsmoothed LARGE SKY BLUE CLOTH.

CLOSE ON -- A THREE-FOOT TALL, COMPRESSED LIGHT WEIGHT METALLIC STATUE resembling a BOTTLE-NOSE DOLPHIN HYBRID, HALF-MAN, HALF-DOLPHIN WALKING UPRIGHT slips off a natural ledge in a rock wall and falls into the CHANNEL of WATER. No one sees it exists. The camera tracks it as it floats away on its back down the channel of water with the current.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. PONCE'S PROJECT UTOPIA SUITE - NIGHT

INSERT: Project Utopia, Bahamas

CLOSE ON -- An OVERPOWERING SURGING HALO OF METALLIC SILVER LIGHT coming off of a TV REMOTE CONTROL lying on a bedside table.

Acheron Ponce is coming out of his sleep from the BRIGHT RADIANT GLOW filling the room. Ponce rubs his eyes and shields them with his hand from the blinding light. He looks down on the bedside table at the TV REMOTE and picks it up. He gets out of bed and puts on a WHITE TOGA with a WIDE FOREST GREEN SASH DRAPED OVER THE SHOULDER and CIRCLED AROUND THE WAIST. He slips on a pair of RED TOMMY BAHAMA BEACH WALKER CANVAS SANDALS. He exits his suite.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. PROJECT UTOPIA DECK - SAME

CLOSE ON -- TV base coming out of the PLATFORM, ROTATING and UNFOLDING the SCREEN SECTIONS.

Acheron Ponce clicks the remote to turn the TV on. He clicks through the channels, but all he gets is WHITE NOISE and SNOW. A few minutes later, J’SEPP VULOCKS, the THREE-FOOT TALL, COMPRESSED LIGHT WEIGHT METALLIC STATUE resembling CLOSELY a BOTTLE-NOSE DOLPHIN HYBRID, HALF-MAN, HALF-DOLPHIN WALKING UPRIGHT comes on the TV. J’sepp is standing on a SMALL STRIP of a WHITE SAND ISLAND with a GROUP of FUTURISTIC-LOOKING DOMES PARTIALLY SUBMERGED in the WATER in the BACKGROUND.

CHARACTER NOTE: (J’SEPP VULOCKS, pronounced JUH SEP VUH LUX, is a Nommo from Pleiades, the seven-star planet. He takes the shape of a dolphin walking upright. His forelimbs are pectoral flippers. He has a bottlenose, a snout-like projection resembling the bottlenose dolphin. He has SILVERY METALLIC skin fading to white on his lower jaw and belly, with spots in his ventricles, dorsal fin located at the center of his back. Eyes are on the sides of the head. He has NO MOUTH. Ears, located just behind the eyes, are small inconspicuous openings, with no external flaps. THE SYNTHETIC VOICE is a SYNTHESIZED SPEECH PROGRAM to be accurate in the voice of this ANIMATED 3-D ALIEN CHARACTER.)

(V.O.) J’SEPP VULOCKS
Ancient tidings, earthling Ponce. Thank you for answering my summons. I am J’sepp Vulocks, Nommo from Pleiades, most recently from the Old City of Jerusalem at Jaffa Gate leading to Mt. Zion. I’ve been lying in a dormant, catatonic state buried underground in that location for several thousand years near Solomon’s Pools. I was aboard our Sister Ship from Sirius. Through no fault of our own, we crashed to Earth.

ACHERON PONCE
Tidings, alien. Where are you broadcasting from?

(V.O.) J’SEPP VULOCKS
Cape Romano.

ACHERON PONCE
I know it. That’s a barrier island in Southwest Florida located at the southern end of Caxambas Island, just south of Marco Island and northwest of the Ten Thousand Islands. What are you doing out there, J’sepp?

(V.O.) J’SEPP VULOCKS
We’ve come to an end of an evolutionary cycle. Every 5,000 or 25,000 years, the Pleaidian Emissaries of Light surface to make our existence known. I have located you by telepathy scan cerebral rolodex encoding to help save humanity from evil. There is a leviathan, in the biblical sense, who is destroying peaceful living. The leviathan has surfaced from the waters for a takeover of global proportions.

ACHERON PONCE
I have seen this behemoth thing in the water—a hideous invention of Satan. It wrapped itself around me in its tentacles with a death grip of hellacious envy, like the Seven Princes of Hell—and its gatekeeper Hellmouth. What can I do avatar and enlightened master?

(V.O.) J’SEPP VULOCKS
I am here at the dome houses of Cape Romano. The domes have fallen off of the island into the water from the hurricane. It is crucial that dolphin brain repatterning and dolphin star-linking work to make the quantum leap into Christ consciousness to save the human species. Meet me here in invitation as the chosen one. I must go and recharge my energy cells. Out.

The TV screen goes SNOWY.

Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater

 

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Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 10/3/2014
This is a screenplay, right? It leaves me eagerly anticipating what will come next. It's quite a departure from yoiur usual western fare.

Take care,

Chip B.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/1/2014
Your script shows great imagination, coupled with much earthly and astronomical understanding, and creativity… The kind that sells to a public interested in wild, crazy, imaginative science fiction. Reads like the beginning of a great video game.

My tendency is toward science fact in my science fiction, rather than science fantasy that is prevalent in yours. However I certainly enjoyed the Dune series even though it was highly fanciful. I would have to read a lot more of your Evil Seed: New Jericho, or see the film, to give my opinion on whether I liked it or not. I'm not on social media, so I can't give you a like or not, but I can say that you've written this little excerpt very well.

Ron

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