Sage Sweetwater is the name of Colorado Firebrand Lesbian Novelist, Poet, Storyteller, Screenwriter, Business Artist and Pulpit Agent. Sweetwater the lesbian icon of our century chiming in as the American lesbian poet trailblazer bought by Hollywood-Wall Street in film promotion for her 19th film 'The Winds of Eleven'. Sweetwater films now in production.
INT. SALOON -- DAY
MADAM TALOOSE, GORGEOUS, BUXOM BLOND, walks down from the stairs in a LIGHT BLUE LONG FANCY GOWN. She is holding the side of her gown hoisting it off the stairs a few inches as not to trip. She walks to the crowded bar. Men are at tables playing poker.
MADAM TALOOSE
(to the bartender)
The girls have something up their blouse. Dillinger Kloberdanz has requested madam up her quote on foreplay rum one six-ounce glass to sustain erection and loosen the tongue.
The bartender pours a glass of rum.
BARTENDER
I’ll deliver it to Dillinger right away, madam.
Madam Taloose picks up the glass of rum.
MADAM TALOOSE
The rum’s not for Dillinger, it’s for me.
BARTENDER
Pardon me, madam.
MADAM TALOOSE
That’s quite alright.
Madam strolls down to the end of the bar with the glass of rum in her hand where Dillinger is sitting.
MADAM TALOOSE
Hello, Dillinger.
Dillinger turns to the side on his stool. He tips his hat.
DILLINGER KLOBERDANZ
Afternoon, madam. You bringin’ me a quote on that rum, or is it me that drives a hard bargain?
MADAM TALOOSE
My tongue’s loose, how’s your erection?
Dillinger rises from his stool.
DILLINGER KLOBERDANZ
Shall we?
Madam Taloose leads Dillinger up the stairs.
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Reviewed by Jane Foxx
6/27/2017
Greetings SS:
You name, books, and short stories are listed under the category, "Lesbian", and THAT is what I expected to be reading about. However, I don't see ANY of what I came for. As soon as I get better organized, I will post a few of my own short stories, so you may do a bit of comparing and contrasting. Good fortune, Dr. Jane Foxx, PhD.
During the 1960's a young soldier struggles with basic training, a bully sergeant and his own inner demons. A tale of struggle, redemption and survival.
INT. SALOON -- DAY
