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First Date Part Two
by Mystic Rose
Saturday, July 29, 2017

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     Story about a relationship


The chicken breast was tender the baby carrots juicy sweet and the company
well,... THAT was the real treat. He invited her to take a walk along the lake and
watch the swans swim by. So far his first date was turning out real fine. The trees
bent their branches as if to caress their thoughts. Contented and joyful they leaned
towards each other sharing past experiences. A boudary space opened as they
shared stories of sabotaged relationships that missed the boating dock .
"Do you want children" she asked and that was the grendade that quietly began
to unpin the freshly romance that had just begun. "No" he replied flatly. An intake
of breath was heard and then, she asked the next obvious question, "Why" the
sudden change of converstation turned the sky a sympnony of grey and dense.
"I'm don't like kids" was his reply. A thousand doors shut down and a dozen
went off the hinge. "Are we erecting walls?" she asked. She was too bright and
he was falling much to fast so he said at the turn of her head "it's getting kind of
late and I got work tomorrow, shall I call you a cab?" "Don't bother" she answered
then turned around and walked away.
Should he run after her and try to explain or should he let her go? He decided to
turn west and head for home. He grabbed a beer from the fridge slipped in an old DVD then quietly sat watching the old re-run. The Bonanza boys blared their saddles on the silver screen. He sat and wondered why when it came to relationships, he always ran away then second guessed.

To be continued...

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/30/2017
Women are from Venus and men are from Mars, according to a best-selling book on the subject. Until there is some common ground (an accidental pregnancy?), the twain shall never meet.

I recall my first date with a hometown girl just graduated from high school with no real prospects except working as a secretary. She asked me to marry her as I kissed her goodnight. A junior in college, I put her off. Six months later, she left me for a submariner she met at her cousin's wedding. I sat with her parents at the reception. She got the prize engagement ring from him, but ended up marrying her best friend's brother. Somebody she told me she didn't like very much. My sister sent me a notice last year that she died.

Ron
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 7/29/2017
But, of course, she sabotaged what might have been a budding relationship by putting the cart before the horse. On the other hand, she nipped it in the bud by cutting to the chase.
Reviewed by John Herlihy 7/29/2017
Oh those dreaded first dates. You have described this admirably well, vivid and true to life. John

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