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Chapter 1: The Last Wanderer
by Ronald W. Hull
Wednesday, January 3, 2018

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     At the request of readers, I am serializing a novel based on my short story, Last Man Standing. This is a draft, so your comments are appreciated.

 

Prologue

 It is often stated that we live on a very thin layer of civilization that is only a few thousand years old. Beneath this veneer is a savage desire to maintain territory for basic survival that goes back a million years and more. All that it takes for that thin layer of civilization to disappear is for the structure that holds it together to fail. Historically, many great civilizations have failed. We are only now determining why.

Modern society, particularly in the United States and other Western countries, is very dependent upon a very complex interaction between government, corporations and flexible small businesses that create the complex weblike economy and allow it to prosper. While natural disasters and war can cause severe disruption, societies that suffer these calamities often rebound better than ever. But when the entire world is caught up in a domino effect of many calamities, mostly the loss of the basic underpinnings of survival, there is no easy coming back.

This novel is based on a short story I wrote, Last Man Standing. The same words have been used to describe a comedy competition TV show, and similar words have been used for a comedic look at one person surviving an epidemic and then finding others, creating a sort of sitcom of luxurious survival. And there are other apocalyptic scenarios in television and movies.

This one is different. The damage done is so great that the percentage of people that survive are very small. This is not a story of preppers and survivalists. The man whose story is told thinks he is alone. And he is. Robinson Crusoe in a familiar, but lonely, world. Except there is no guy Friday found to accompany him in his loneliness.



 

Chapter1

 

How We Got Here



What if, like in the movie, I Am Legend, you were the last man…


    Last man left?  Well, I guess I may well be.  Haven't seen anyone else for a long time.  And time is something I'm losing track of with all the years running together, piling up, perhaps twenty, twenty-five, since this all began to happen; since the world came apart.

Everyone could see it coming, but no one could stop it because we all were on a course that we couldn't control or change—inertia, I guess.  It all started when we passed seven billion people.  Now that's a number I never could comprehend.  Somehow, we conquered death, disease, and even, war, and still ran off the track because we multiplied like rabbits with no control—nobody watched the pen.

And then, we were full of ourselves, thinking that we could all live better if we just did more and got rich.  I guess I would define getting rich as having more than you needed for basic living.  Well, once we got it, we didn't stop until we had more.  And more.  And more.  And we didn't just do this for ourselves but for everybody else.  Pretty soon, everybody on earth was wanting more, doing more and having more than they absolutely needed.

Problem was, our Earth only had so much of a good thing to give us.  Oh, with technology, we could manipulate the environment to give us more of something we wanted like gold, oil, or exotic food from halfway around the world at our fingertips.  But, everything has its price and its limits.  All the while we were stuffing our faces and adding to our inventories of junk, our mother Earth was being ripped apart and reorganized to meet our ever-growing desires. Progress.

But it was all a house of cards we had been stacking since the very beginning of farming, settlements and the population increase that resulted.  As the stack of cards got higher and more unstable, we just kept bolstering it up and adding more until it reached a breaking point—one of many weak points along the way—that burst.  After the house of cards started to collapse, it fell against other houses, creating a domino effect that just kept getting worse.

There were people all over the planet trying to save animals, birds, and even insects that were rapidly disappearing after evolving over millions of years.  At the same time, we were cutting down the forests, mining the arid areas and mountains, and stripping the seas of fish.  We were polluting the air, land, and water—the very air we needed to breathe, the land we needed for food and water to quench our thirst.

And there had always been people on the edge that we ignored by the billions, living in poverty to the point where their lives were very short and with little purpose except to reproduce or spread disease.  When it started, while billions around the earth were gradually working their way out of poverty to a lifestyle of riches, this group on this margin, this ignored group that was always there, but too primitive to have any say in things, began to grow.

Gradually, the weather changed.  Increasingly, there were long periods of drought, followed by flooding, and stronger storms, including tornadoes, hurricanes and the like.  Constant foraging for wood denuded large areas of land where all the trees had been cut down from once virgin forest.  Drought, disease and forest fires made these areas into deserts where the wind blew all the topsoil away. The resulting erosion and open pit mining replaced the good topsoil with toxic elements that followed the rivers and streams to the sea. Wind spread toxic dust everywhere.  

Human waste and debris also followed every river to the sea.  Eventually, the sea became clogged with poisonous chemicals, toxic elements, and debris that threatened the sea's very ability to produce life or food.  In the meantime, fishing and whaling removed large quantities of desirable, and undesirable, fish and other animals from the sea.  The sea couldn't replenish itself.  The land couldn't replenish itself.  The handwriting was on the wall.

I am writing this with paper and pencil that I found lying here, in my oasis for many years.  There were days when I wrote avidly with electronic words that spanned the globe.  But those days are gone because there is no electricity to power the grid or to charge the batteries of the most sophisticated devices that man could create—useless and corroded now without that power of electricity.  All that writing is lost and part of the distant past of my life.  For it is too long ago for me to even remember what I wrote about except for those crucial days racing to find Julie that I remember so well. Otherwise, It must've been unimportant or I would have remembered it.  Or would I?  What is important now is survival.  If I don't survive, then nothing will be left except the words I write on this paper.  And I'm not sure that this will last either, although I will try to put it in a safe place until something or someone comes along to read it.

 

 

 

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Reviewed by John DeDakis 5/13/2022
An intriguing glimpse into a dystopia that doesn't seem so far-fetched. You're off to a strong start, Ron.
Reviewed by Danae Wilkin 6/21/2021
Ah grim reality. Welcome to our likely future due to greed and ignorance. Greed of the few and poverty for the many who overpopulate because they know nothing and believe anything including biological impulses and religions that encourage it. After all, how can they propagate their beliefs and membership and money (all goes back to greed) without the next generation in large sums?

Only note: Eventually, the sea became clogged with poisonous chemicals, toxic elements, and debris that threatened the sea's very ability to produce life or food.

Sea is used twice in the same sentence, maybe use ocean for one of them.

I've seen a lot of post-apocalyptic things, as you've mentioned on TV and in movies. I hope this will prove to be unique. Only two things I ask for: no zombies and no cannibals. Do I have your word?
Reviewed by Ann Marie Hannon 7/26/2019
Love it !!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com 9/20/2018
What makes this beginning unique is that an oft written-about series of problems plaguing us now is projected into the future, providing the apocalyptic reality as more than just more of the same-ol' that so many writers lean on, especially in the deluge of apocalyptic TV fare. Here, you suggest a survivor who thinks he's the only survivor, but leaves the reader wondering where the foreshadowing will take us. Well written beginning to a book that bodes freshness in a literary world of, yeah, "same-ol'"
Reviewed by Ersula Odom 1/25/2018
I can totally relate to how you have positioned this story. In a podcast, I put someone on an island to help them understand the value of "history".

It did leave me wanting to read more.
Reviewed by Melva Henderson 1/17/2018
This seems to be the beginning of an intriguing story. It is thought provoking, considering the condition of the world today. I can only imagine what a person might think if they found they might be the last person breathing. It's a good start Ron.
Reviewed by Donald Roberts 1/9/2018
Provocative and extremely fore-sighted.
There is no such thing as a new story idea, since semi-intelligent humans have be telling stories as long as they have been able to communicate. You have done a fine job of adding your own personal twist to familiar theme.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 1/5/2018
The Prologue reminds me of a book I read with the general theme, although I cannot recall its tile. The first chapter also seem similar in its nature. One man who believes he very well be the last surviving man on earth goes about trying to find remnants of himself. his i going to be a fabulous,if I know anything at all about Ronald W. Hull, the author.
Reviewed by Jerri Blair 1/5/2018
I like the concept and the way you set it up. It seems to be a very realistic possibility given the current path we're taking on this planet. It's interesting to think what it would be like to be the last person alive. Where did all that consciousness go?
Reviewed by John Herlihy 1/4/2018
An interesting concept definitely worth exploring. So far your prose reads very well, clear and crisp, without fault. I once wrote a chapter in one of my books called "Man Against the Last Horizon", although the subject matter was different, the concept perhaps was similar. I look forward to more, much more. It seems like you have your work cut out for you.

PS: Love the title, by the way, kinda puts the finger on something in me as well.
Reviewed by Jon Dahlborg 1/4/2018
Ron...this is a haunting reminder of man's desire to achieve success at the expense of civilization. I look forward to Chapter 2!
My best to you as you continue to engage the reader with thought provoking words!
Jon
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 1/4/2018
a fine and well penned beginning to a tale that leaves one wanting for its continuance
Reviewed by Adele Gill 1/3/2018
The Last Wanderer by Ronald W. Hull is truly thought provoking--even a little haunting, as it deals with one man's existential crisis. One can only imagine what it would be like to endure the desolation of such an experience. The loneliness, the isolation, the lack of resources after living lives full of people and things, for some, in excess. It is not too far-fetched to think that the Earth only has so much to give civilization before things change and we are left to our own ingenuity and devices. Surely much rests in the power grid alone, as many in western civilization venture through life as we know it in some degree of comfort.

In a way, this chapter begs the reader to identify and embrace what is truly important in their daily life. It challenges us to think about what it would be like if all the amenities and modern conveniences we live with in our corner of civilization are gone, what do we really have?

I think Ron Hull's story serves as a stark reminder that we are called to take care of, and appreciate, all that we have, and reach out to others less fortunate among us in our local and global communities. We need to be good stewards of the people in our care, the environment, and all our resources, and help each other wherever and however we can. None of us knows what tomorrow will bring, so we need to live fervently and with God-given purpose in the here and now with the understanding that life is a precious gift--one we must meet on its terms. ###
Reviewed by Lark Pogue 1/3/2018
Well, even though this is my second reading of this chap, I still felt it was the beginning of a great book. I hope everyone will read it.
L,L

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