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Shargo the Strong
by Jansen Estrup
Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     A character developed for my book Starlight On Stone and commentary

 


 

Shargo the Strong
by Jansen Estrup

 

One of the most important characters in my book, Starlight On Stone NORTH, is Shargo the Strong.

His great physical strength is also a tremendous liability, for much like his fellow mythological hero, Midas, he is cursed with a 'talent' beyond his control. Whereas everything King Midas touched turned to gold, something truly useless for simple survival, Shargo's strength carries the relentless threat of his own destruction.

Shargo, like Heracles/Hercules (Glory to Hera) and other strong men, has a reality based counterpart. Recently young children have gone viral demonstrating incredible feats of strength, vivid projections of classical heroes such as Atlas, Gilgamesh and Samson.

Nowadays this extremely rare condition is called myostatin-related muscle hypertrophy, an extraordinary ordering of skeletal muscles. Rare as this condition is, Shargo has a further complication, a twin set of abdominal muscles which, when over exercised as in battle, work violently against each other. Often, without warning, this results in a painful, total paralysis of his entire body. Thus he is both divinely strong and fatally vulnerable.

As a small child I knew such a man, and his wife. They lived on the Florida West Coast, on Siesta Key. Unfortunately their names are lost, but I do recall that they were 'smallish' people. As a four or five year old, they did not seem so big to me and my parents, at 74 and 68 inches tall, towered over them both. They were white-haired and once, while I was there, I witnessed one of her 'fits' of paralysis. It was horrible to watch and everyone seemed powerless to help. For you see, both husband and wife had this truly odd physical affliction. It was how they met and how they lived. The story, as a five year old remembers, is that a young man saved a damsel from certain death by chasing down and hauling in a carriage drawn by brace of horses run wild in the streets of New York. It occurs to me now that this couple might have been circus people for the Ringling Bros., Barnum and Bailey Circus wintered not so far away. I do not remember much more about them, except that they never had any children.

The character of Shargo, then, began to evolve from these long ago memories and my curiosity about such a life. What loyalty does a companion warrior hold for one who fights so bravely and well, but requires half a dozen more in order to protect him when he inevitalby falls? And no matter how they might wish it, what real friendship can such an unequal relationship develop? Either he far exels his peers or they outdo him in his peril. Either way, savior or burden, he dominates. Shargo may just as well be a spirit, like Humbaba of the Forest, or Gilgamesh's wild willed brother, Enkidu. Few men can be truly trusted. How can such a man develop a lasting friendship?

Shargo, a seaside Luwan, finds such a friend in another outcast, the disgraced Hurrian prince, Attili. Shargo is a quiet, almost dimmur presence. Attili, for a long time, wondered if the strong man was also mute. Their friendship is rare, fast and tragic.

Shargo ... still lives.

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 11/29/2018

spell binding, holds reader interest


never stop writing

m
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg 11/21/2018
"total paralysis' Yikes. Poor guy. And 'lasting friendships' in my experiences are rare anymore JE. Being unequally yoked with another can be a big problem. I wonder what kind of technology Midas used to turn things into gold. A fascinating character. You offer the reader much to chew on in 6 paragraphs. Enjoyed this. Best with your books. Regards... rlc
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 11/21/2018
The first thing I thought of as you were describing Shargo was that the people you remember were little people like the family that my cousin married into here in Houston and the Houston girl at 16 who is now a finalist on The Voice. Little people (some of the names used for them have become politically incorrect because they were abusive) generally have a muscular anatomy that is normal but their shortened skeleton makes them look like they have pumped iron or as we used to say, musclebound.

I also immediately thought that they were members of a circus. Believe it or not, some circuses wintered in Baraboo, Wisconsin, infamous home of high schoolers giving Nazi salutes on the Internet. I can't imagine what their animals, like elephants and big cats, went through during those cold, snowy winters. I think that Florida was a much better venue.

Having two sets of abdominal muscles causing the paralysis, is really strange. I would think that epilepsy would be more in order but I haven't read in detail how you describe the symptom of paralysis. I recall that I had a girlfriend once that when we were out one time she suddenly went rigid and couldn't move or even say anything for a period of about two or three minutes. It scared the death out of me, because I didn't know what to do and was glad she came out of it. It could have been epilepsy as well. She left me shortly after that because she was in a hurry to get married and I did not ask her. So I never found out what it was that caused that short period of paralysis. She died, last year, and around 70. Too young for a woman these days.

Ron
Reviewed by John Herlihy 11/20/2018
Utterly fascinating. Never heard of this condition. Sounds like great potential for story-telling.

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