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Cyber City Park
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A pome about the original sinful fruit

CYBER CITY PARK

by Jansen Estrup

A place I've found again, anew
as varied as a child's dark grue.
visions there are wishfully wry,
devulge a joyful cup, a brew
of words to cause a mem'ries stew.

Like old men playing cards or squares
deal pawns and queens with carnal care,
They share a thought, a dream, some lies,
as peddlers raising armies dare
arrange a banner's caustic blare.

And yet collective wit have they
amassed through summed up year and day,
I find them apt with thought, and wise,
so ept at turning phrase and play
each one has something mute to say.

And so I wander glad each morn
among keyboards and synapse worn
the universe's ceaseless cries
thru eachothers' eyes forelorn
we mesh, collate, are dead and born

Akkadian, Marshman, travelers each
in wheel'd chairs, sweptup wing, afloatin' breech
and layer, tapper, awedged apogi(ees)
rooted well, a soaring reach
a forest park, a place to teach

That early feast and cryptic stroll
amongst towered spines and starry pall,
you rise up and in turn enthrawl
and so and so and so and I
do thank you each and one and all

2014

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Cyber City Park"
Reviewed by Darryl Ehlers
Reviewed on May 10, 2017
Hi Jansen
Forgive me in criticizing your poem. You did a great job. Suggestion=
I would remove all 3rd lines of all your verses to give musical rhythm
to your verses and it does not take away from your structure
Have a Good Pilgrim Darryl Ehlers



Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on October 29, 2014
you're absolutely right, we wonder the keyboards, we mesh, collate, some are dead, some are born, I like that verse says much meaningful too. A forest park teaches lots these days. Wondering in it is amaze. I thank you for this write, it's simply devine.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 15, 2014
I like your breadth and use of unusual diction in this piece, Jansen, and your seemingly classical treatment in rhyme of a very brassy, real-life topic. Quite a modern-day 'epic'.

each one has something mute to say.

- I found this quite a thought-provoking line. Thank you. Kate

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 11, 2014
Thank you for sharing your "estrupian" wisdom and experience, Jansen. There is substance to think upon in your verses. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2014
That pome is quite a tome! ;-)

Seriously, I enjoy coming to this little Cyber Park every morning to see what serious writers like you have to say with your wisdom and experience. My only wish is that we actually could be under some beautiful virtual redwood trees dappled shade keep the sun out of our eyes as we drink a couple of java and enjoy swapping tales.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
This is a stylish salute to age and to wisdom
and it’s clear you’ve amassed enough of one
and lots more of the other.


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