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Greeks and Other Baal-cains
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A violent lament of the human condition


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Greeks and other Baal-cains
 

copyright 1996

by H F Jansen Estrup
 


Tantalus hatched his vengeful plot
And the other gods leapt back in horror -
For Tiwz recalled his father’s glut,
Foreswore his sons would rue that gore.

But Tantalus hated Tiwz a lot,
More than he loved his son -
So he cooked the boy up in a pot
And fed him at dinner to the holy ones

They sniffed the scheme out ‘fore they ate,
Queen Hera laughed - she knew that breed -
But Tiwz decreed a thund’rin’ fate
For Tantalus and all his seed.

So all we humans, forever, ever
Are proscribed from learning how we taste.
Small wonder that we kill so clever,
And let the game meat rot and waste!

The Curse of Zeus is hard to bear,
He slew his own dad, vile old Kronus,
Then raped his sisters, smiled and dared
Someone to say No, no, not us!
       
He condemned his children to murder and war
Then changed his name to Ares and Thor,
‘Though sometimes he liked to be Taurus,
And called it all war and love - and fair -
       
        Thus on us all lies an odious onus,
        To decide whether gods really own us
        And whether or not we still care.

The gods we now worship, one holy Tri-Baalis
Has decreed the essential same things,
That kills in His Name are not serious sins,
Just so we’re crass killers, not cannibals ...

c1996

  

 

 

 

         

 


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 Reviews of "Greeks and Other Baal-cains"
Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on April 17, 2018
I don't remember Mythology being so crude and vicious. Many vile actions have been performed "in the name of God."

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 22, 2017

thought provoking read!!


never stop writing!

m

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 21, 2013
Ye Gods! I never knew as much and well told. M.True

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on July 28, 2013
Ah the curse of free will and the perilous decisions we must make. While I myself am not sure that a benevolent God would promote killing in his name, nevertheless it still happens. You have couched the eternal question in well written lines my friend. The graven gods were only reflections of human nature, dark and otherwise, but still only human gods. I love a poem that makes me think and entertains me at the same time. You have done both. Bob

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 27, 2012
Powerful stuff well crafted in expression, Jansen. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on October 22, 2012
EXCELLENT Shroud into the darkled myrrh of expression
and too so very deep the psychological brain busting action here!!
And it reins true globally to this very day about murder and cannibalism

From Vaulted Darkness
They Never Said If She/He Tasted Like Chicken…(I know lol That’s badddd)
Candle Wax & Witches Brew

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on August 28, 2012
sounds like the ancient gods were worse than men in some cases! well penned.


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