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Whittlin' Sticks
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Saturday, August 5, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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When life feels too complicated, reminisce over times when you were but a kid in a simpler grownup world. It does wonders.


 

Whittlin’ Sticks


A stick is a stick,
Unit it isn’t.

Granddad knew.
People still whittled then.
Clasp knives had a purpose
On porches and tree stumps
Wisdom did sit
Piling shavings at their feet

Heads on paws,
Dogs blinked occasionally,
Keeping close watch on creation.

Sticks got shorter,
And shorter,
Then very short.

For many a granddad
Whittling was intense
Sculpturing the day’s purpose
Rendering heavy thoughts ever light
As dogs, children,
Passersby,
Exchanged one’s everyday little thoughts.

And so it was.

There was precision and reason in his focus,
Even as he suffered through a day’s
Crunch
Cram
And grind,
Anticipating the sculptured big stick
Becoming his prideful little stick,
Later.

As late night fireflies danced,
He rocked on the porch,
Explored the meaty stowaways of the day,
And savored the best parts,
Only he and his toothpick could appreciate.

 
The dog now with raised head wondered.


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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 5, 2023
Oh my! I do so love this piece of writing, every little bit of it. To me it is gorgeous, profound, unsuggary nostalgia; and that last bit about the toothpick was a wizardly placement for the unveiling of what his “prideful little stick” actually is. Delightful surprise, that. You created this with such presence, Odin, that I felt I was there — and what better comment for a writer to get I can’t imagine. My favorite line is “Rendering heavy thoughts ever light” — just the way you worded that line made it stand up high. Also, the ‘meaty stowaways’ stanza with all of those last three lines are able to illuminate the venerable value of remembrances. I love the photograph and I love the bare naked truth of your introduction. ~~ djl