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Wytchfire
by Michael Meyerhofer   
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Category:  Fantasy
Publisher: Red Adept Publishing

ISBN-10:  1940215285

Type: Fiction

Pages: 362

Copyright: 
2014
ISBN-13: 9781940215280

Price: $4.99 (eBook)


Game of Thrones meets the X-Men.

In a land haunted by the legacy of dead dragons, Rowen Locke has been many things: orphan, gravedigger, mercenary. All he ever wanted was to become a Knight of Crane and wield a kingsteel sword against the kind of grown horrors his childhood knows all too well.

But that dream crumbled--replaced by a new nightmare.

War is overrunning the realms, an unprecedented duel of desire and revenge, steel and sorcery. And for one disgraced man who would be a knight, in a world where no one is blameless, the time has come to decide which side he's on.



Excerpt

CHAPTER ONE
The Exile

“My name’s Dagath.” The robber grinned.
Rowen blinked away the blood dripping down half his face and met the robber’s gaze. The wound was still too fresh to hurt, but his senses reeled. The robber towered over him, a big man with rotten teeth. He wore mismatched leather armor that he’d probably taken off previous victims, most of which looked too small and also cracked from poor upkeep, the buckles rusted through. Most striking was the fact that the robber was missing an eye but had not even bothered to cover the scarred socket with a patch.
Dagath paused, clearly amused by the look on Rowen’s face. “Men ought to know the name of the man who’s going to kill them. I’d ask yours, but I don’t really give a damn.” He gave his cudgel a few menacing practice swings. “You ready to go to the gods, boy?”
Rowen had struggled back onto his feet but could do little more. The blow to his head had caught him completely by surprise, stunning him long enough for a second, smaller robber to bind Rowen’s hands behind his back. Rowen might have fought with his feet—on the Lotus Isles, he’d been taught to kick as well as punch—but it took all his willpower just to hold onto consciousness.
Breaking Dagath’s gaze, Rowen looked around and spotted his shortsword lying nearby: a plain but elegant weapon with a waisted, Ivairian-style blade, all Rowen had left from his old life. Dagath scooped it up and whistled.
“Not bad. Probably sell for a nice price in one of the cities. Me, I prefer a good club.” Dagath stabbed the shortsword into the earth and stepped so close that Rowen could smell the stink of the man’s breath, like rotten meat bathed in sour milk. Rowen’s eyes fell on his attacker’s cudgel again.
But the robber did not strike, clearly content to enjoy the moment. He jabbed the tip of his cudgel into Rowen’s chin and pushed his head to eye level. “What, no clever last words? No bribes?” He looked past Rowen at the second robber, still standing behind him. “This is a first!”
“Whatever coins I’ve got, I imagine you’ll get soon enough,” Rowen said, seething. “You’ve already got my sword. Besides that, all I’ve got left is in my pack. Go have a look.”
Rowen nodded toward his satchel, which he’d dropped the moment he saw the small man lying on the road, feigning injury. Rowen had seen that trick before: a robber called for help, waited until some hapless traveler got close, then stuck a knife in his throat and took what he wanted. Rowen had been ready for that. But in his overconfidence, he had not seen Dagath sneaking up behind him.
Dagath turned, reflexively eyeing the pack. Gathering what strength he had left, Rowen pitched forward and drove his knee toward the robber’s groin. With a look of only mild surprise, Dagath twisted and took the blow on his hip instead. Then he swung his cudgel into Rowen’s knee.
Rowen bit his lip to keep from screaming and fell back down.
He wondered if he would lose consciousness after all. Might be better that way. But then he cursed and fought back the darkness nipping at his vision. Dagath upended the satchel onto the ground. Small Man, confident that Rowen was going nowhere, hurried forward to inspect the goods. Both looked disappointed.
Aside from a few articles of clothing, the satchel contained little more than a whetstone, sword-oil, a nearly empty waterskin, a rolled up scrap of parchment, his coin pouch, and two books. Dagath snatched up the coin pouch, yanked it open, and shook out its contents. He gave Rowen a withering look when only three copper coins tumbled out.
“This it, boy?” He threw them on the ground and used his cudgel to poke through the rest of Rowen’s possessions.
Small Man retrieved the coins and inspected them. “I think these are Isle coins,” he said quietly, holding up one to the afternoon light and inspecting the seal. “Looks like some kind of bird balancing on one foot.”
A crane. Rowen kept silent. He had managed to roll onto his side, to keep the weight off his knee. Rowen’s instincts had saved him, allowing him to pivot at the last second. He did not think Dagath’s blow had smashed his kneecap, though the pain was making his eyes water.
Dagath frowned and snatched the coin from Small Man’s grasp, inspecting it for himself. “You don’t have to be an Isleman to have Isle coins, you dunce! They use ’em all over these days.” He started to discard the copper coin then changed his mind and pocketed it instead.
“Or maybe he’s an Isle Knight,” Small Man offered. “Might be one giant ransom if he is!”
Dagath gave his accomplice so cold a look that, for a moment, Rowen wondered if Small Man’s suggestion would be answered by Dagath’s cudgel. Dagath pointed. “Does that look like an Isle Knight to you?” Before Small Man could answer, Dagath returned to where Rowen was still lying in pain. He prodded him with his cudgel. “Well, speak up, boy. You a Knight?”
Rowen’s face turned almost the same color as the blood drying around his gashed forehead. “I’m no Knight. Never even been to the Isles.” Shame surged through him, but he masked it with anger. “Get on with it. Either kill me or leave me, you bastard.”
But Dagath’s good eye sparkled. “You’re lying.” He went back to Rowen’s goods and retrieved one of the books. He opened one then laughed coldly. “I can’t read, but I know Lotus Isle scribbles when I see them.” He threw the book to his accomplice. “You’re too grubby to be a Knight, and you’re too pale to be a native Isleman.” He paused, sneering. “Know what I think?”
Rowen started to close his eyes then stopped himself, trying to meet Dagath’s gaze without emotion. He offered no reply.
Nevertheless, Dagath laughed. He turned to his accomplice. “Know what we have here, Sneed? Another exile.” He flashed Rowen another toothy, rotten grin. Sneed nodded, but Dagath explained anyway.
Just to taunt me… and gods know I deserve it!
“You see, once in a while, some dumb bastard gets it in his head to sail off to the Lotus Isles and be a Knight. Only they don’t take kindly to mainlanders—so if you want to train, you have to pay. A lot.” Dagath pretended to be lost in thought. “I bet this one was a sellsword… probably spent years saving up the coin!” He laughed again. “They took his money. Then, once they were tired of him, they kicked him out.” He grabbed a handful of Rowen’s unruly red hair, jerking up so Rowen was looking at him. “Am I right?”
Rowen said nothing. Dagath chuckled and returned to Sneed, who had retrieved the second book as well and was busy leafing through them.
“What are they?” Dagath asked him.
“Can’t read more than a few words, but this one looks like a whole big list of rules.” Sneed handed the thicker volume back to Dagath, who merely glanced at it then tossed it aside. “This other one”—Sneed half-smiled—“looks like poetry.” He opened a page and held it up. “Pretty pictures, too. Colored ink. There’s a handsome one of a dragon in here somewhere…” He started leafing through the pages again.
“They worth anything?”
Sneed shrugged. “Probably some priest in Lyos would buy them—or some rich ambassador from the Isles, if we can find one.” He paused to think it over. “I bet each one’s worth at least as much as that sword of his!”
Rowen recalled how, on the Isles, illustrated copies of the Codex Lotius could be bought from almost any street vendor for a few copper coins. As for the Codex Viticus, that arduous tome had been forced on him almost as soon as he arrived at Saikaido Temple. Rowen would be glad to be rid of it. If I survive, that is.
At the mention of Rowen’s shortsword, Dagath had gone and retrieved it with his free hand. By then, the failed squire had sat up, straining vainly against his bonds.
“Don’t bother. Sneed’s not worth much, but at least he can tie a decent knot.” His smile looked almost genuine. “Almost feel like I should thank you, boy. Any last words? Maybe a plea to the Dragongod?”
Rowen had already tried to stand and failed, but he knew he had to try again. His mind scrambled for some kind of diversion. Then an idea formed. Though it was ludicrous, he had no choice.
“My father’s a blacksmith in Harso, not far from here,” he lied. “He’s not rich, mind you, but he’s got a few coins to rub together. He was the one who paid for my training. Gods know what he’ll say when he finds out I got kicked out!” Rowen forced a smile. “Anyway, if it’s ransom you’re after, take me there.”
Dagath scowled, clearly trying to decide if his captive was telling the truth. Thanks to years of training on the Isles, Rowen had the arms of a blacksmith, though everything else about him—unkempt hair, plain clothes, the fact that he was traveling alone—more closely resembled a sellsword. Dagath glanced down, studying Rowen’s shortsword again. Though unadorned, the crossguard was brass, the blade high quality.
Kayden gave me that… The thought of his dead brother made Rowen wince, but he hoped Dagath mistook his grief for fear.
“He could be telling the truth,” Sneed offered.
“Or he could be stalling, hoping he can get away—or wait us out until somebody comes along and rescues him.” Dagath lifted the hand holding Rowen’s shortsword and used one dirty thumbnail to scratch at his scarred eye socket. “That it, boy? You think some armored knight’s gonna thunder in and save you?”
“No,” Rowen said and meant it. He knew as well as his captors that they were too far from the coast, where they might be chanced upon by a patrol of Isle Knights. Lyos was still the closest of the Free Cities, but wanting to be left alone, Rowen had chosen to travel there via the most deserted road—a decision he was deeply regretting.
Dagath looked down at Rowen’s shortsword again then glanced back at the books, visibly weighing the odds, trying to decide if he should be content with his already-impressive haul or push his luck and hope that Rowen himself could be ransomed.
This one’s cruel, not stupid, Rowen realized. He knows if he takes a ransom note to a town—whether I’m lying or not—he might wind up dead. Better he sticks with what he already has.
But greed won out. “Fine, we’ll try it your way. If you’re telling it true, maybe you’ll even have to keep the gods waiting awhile.” Dagath lowered his weapons. “Sneed can write some, but it’s best the note’s in your scribbles. You know letters?”
Rowen nodded. “I can write.”
Dagath smirked. “Figures.” He gestured with his cudgel at Rowen’s meager pile of possessions. “I don’t want to tear up them books. Sneed, I saw parchment there. Bring it.”
Rowen restrained a curse when he realized the scrap of parchment that Dagath was referring to. He wanted to argue but thought better of it. Sneed brought the scrap. He gave Rowen a faint, nearly reassuring smile as he handed the ancient-looking parchment to Dagath. This one’s different. He’s a robber, sure, but not quite a cutthroat.
Dagath kicked his injured knee to catch his attention. Rowen swore. Dagath said, “Scribble your father, tell him he pays twenty silvers or else he’ll have to bury you in pieces.”
Rowen knew better than to accept too quickly. “Twenty silvers is a lot. I told you, he’s poor—”
“And I’m pretty. What of it? Every town needs a blacksmith. The villagers can pass around a gods-damned collection bowl if they need to.”
“How will you get the letter to him?”
Dagath shrugged. “Sneed can take it.”
Rowen saw his opportunity. “Then Sneed will bring the coin back himself?”
Dagath’s expression changed. Rowen swallowed a smile. You didn’t think of that, you bastard!
Sneed faced Dagath. “You can trust me...”
“Fohl’s hells, I can!” Dagath interrupted with a snort. He fell silent. Rowen could imagine what he was thinking. If Sneed did not deliver the letter, then Dagath would have to do it. That would mean leaving Rowen in Sneed’s care.
He guessed that Dagath had reached the same conclusion. “I’ll take the scribble myself. Harso’s not far.” He turned to Sneed. “Gods hear me, if he’s not here when I get back, I’ll cut out your spine and keep your share.”
Sneed’s face paled. He tried to respond but stammered.
Dagath threw the parchment at Rowen’s feet. He waved to Sneed again. “Untie his hands so he can write. But bind up his feet.” He prodded Rowen with his own shortsword. “Guess I don’t have to tell you what happens if you try anything cute.”
Rowen shook his head.
Sneed bound Rowen’s feet with a length of rope that Rowen had been using as a belt. Sneed’s trembling hands fussed with the bonds securing his wrists. When the bonds went slack, Rowen resisted the impulse to throw an elbow at Sneed’s jaw. He wouldn’t get far with his legs still tied. He massaged his sore wrists then gingerly touched the gash on his forehead from Dagath’s cudgel. Sneed withdrew meekly.
Dagath pointed at the parchment. “Write.”
Rowen hesitated, eyeing the poor but familiar handwriting already covering one whole side of the parchment. “No ink.”
Dagath frowned.
“If you start a fire, I can use the ash.”
“You think I’m stupid, boy? Ash doesn’t last.” Dagath sneered. “Best we use blood.”



Professional Reviews

Fast-paced with great characters
If you are sick of waiting for George R.R. Martin to finish A Song of Ice and Fire, I recommend Wytchfire, the first in a planned series of fantasy novels by Michael Meyerhofer. With strong, multidimensional characters and a conscientious inclusion of groups not often seen in the fantasy genre, Wytchfire succeeds at telling an exciting, page-turning yarn without ever feeling like a guilty pleasure.

Wytchfire is set in a complex fantasy world with elements of King Arthur myths, Japanese feudal period fantasy, and Dungeons & Dragons. The story opens as the main character (with his sexy protagonist name: Rowen Locke) leaves the Lotus Isles, having failed to become a Knight. The Isles are a sort of academy for Knights in training and failure is a major theme throughout the book--particularly poignant during this Great Recession.

The first part of the book resembles Robert E. Howard's Conan the Cimmerian stories in that the main character is a sell-sword concerned with little but his next meal and mug of ale. This freewheeling hundred-or-so pages, though light on plot, were my favorite part of the book. Meyerhofer uses Rowen's homelessness to explore his rich fantasy world; the scenes feel episodic and lightly connected in the tradition of the early twentieth century weird tales.

Soon, the plot kicks in. A huge horde of sorcerers and mercenaries is devastating one city after the other, led by a half-orc half-elf caster whose entire muscled body is covered in tattooed glyphs. His name is Fadarah, which means father. Sounds like the best D&D character ever, right? This antagonist serves as a sort of Magneto for the misunderstood, outcast mages. He adds a level of badass to every chapter he's in and serves as the novel's Big Bad, but like Magneto he has a woobie backstory that endeared his cause to me.

Despite some parts' freewheeling feel and the world's expansiveness, the book is tightly plotted. The last third of novel abounds in twists which I usually did not see coming. Meyerhofer follows the logic of Chekov's gun. (To avoid spoilers, don't look up that reference before reading Wytchfire.)

Meyerhofer's prose is simple enough for the YA crowd but can still entertain this over-thirty fantasy fan. In many ways Wytchfire's prose is better than the later George R.R. Martin novels: Meyerhofer doesn't repeat a single thought through his characters' minds ad nauseum, unlike Martin. At some parts the way Meyerhofer informs us of a character's homosexuality or sexual enslavement to another were subtle enough for Hays Code-era Hollywood. I thought the writing would be improved through a blanket moratorium on exclamation marks, and my Kindle edition had a few typos ("dragonkinDragonkin") but otherwise the novel is well-written.

The fantasy and sci fi genres have become increasingly diversified since the all-white male J.R.R. Tolkien, and it is now customary to include earthly races within the fantasy human race (e.g., George R.R. Martin's inhabitants of the Summer Isles, Orson Scott Card's planets of earthly ethnicities, and Skyrim's Redguard). Meyerhofer makes a point of including the diversity of this world within his fantastical one. Characters entering Wytchfire through Meyerhofer's equal opportunity policy include a female Asian knight, an obese Black merchant, and a homosexual dwarf sellsword. Wytchfire includes the types of characters that should be included in all depictions of fantasy.

Actually, Meyerhofer's commitment to social issues extends beyond populating his novel with underrepresented groups. A major theme running throughout the novel is the abhorrence of rape. At one point Fadarah, the Big Bad, stops a rape in progress. (Ah, Fadarah. If there's any justice in the world we'll see some Wytchfire shipping soon.) Meyerhofer hints throughout the book that the sexual enslavement of children is widespread in the world of Wytchfire. The novel never glamorizes rape nor uses it to comic purposes; within the novel, as with life, it is a violent act which forever scars its victims. Meyerhofer's treatment of sexual violence is another reason Wytchfire never felt like a guilty read, but a feminist take on violence told from a male perspective.

Wytchfire occupies the same space in the fantasy hierarchy as Tad Williams' best novels: deeply fantastical, they reflect elements of our world while still providing an escape. Like Williams' works, it probably won't convert someone who isn't already a fan of the genre. For veterans of fantasy novels or games, Wytchfire is a satisfying read: a complex land populated by interesting characters. I'm looking forward to the second in the trilogy.



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