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Before the Tangled Throes of Spring Would Come
by Daniel S. McTaggart → (All Poetry by Daniel S. McTaggart)
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My first attempt at a villanelle. Bill DeVault and I were talking about these at the bookstore last night. I went back there tonight to compose this over a cup of peppermint tea. Bill, this is for you.









Before the tangled throes of Spring would come,
and the rippling mists of eve would rise,
two souls must match the beat of angry drum.

Two bodies drunk upon the season's rum
should spare sweet space between the inner thighs
before the tangled throes of Spring would come.

There are few depths to which their hearts won't plumb.
Before they sever all their fleshy ties,
two souls must match the beat of angry drum.

The rotted bark all trees would bear is numb,
unless the roots attain a brutal size
before the tangled throes of Spring would come.

To reach their sacred goal of rhythmic hum,
while bodies throb and scream immortal highs,
two souls must match the beat of angry drum.

They each must know the worlds where they are from
if each would live within the other's eyes.
Before the tangles throes of Spring would come,
two souls must match the beat of angry drum. 

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 Reviews of "Before the Tangled Throes of Spring Would Come"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
Beginners luck? I think not. You are just super talented, Daniel. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
I think this is a superb offering well-shared. Thank you for this gift. Love and peace to you, Daniel,

Regis

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2006
I'm not familiar with the word "villanelle" in or outside poetry. But when you string words together, dear DannyMac, I have visions... I enter my own mind and feel a blending with yours. You really have no equal. good ol' katydid xoxoxox

Reviewed by Megan Waldroop
Reviewed on March 29, 2006
You left a couple comments on mine and I thought I'd check your poems out. This style seems to give such a satisfying feeling when you get to the end. Takes a good poet to be able to express beauty under such a critical style. I like it!

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on March 29, 2006
wow...I need to look up some of these different styles and give them a try..this is fantastic! I felt like a was spinning in circles as I read it :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
I tried the villanelle a time or two, but I can say here and now, that neither of them came up to this one's measure. Very good. Reading it, you get a sense of riding a merry-go-round.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
I don't know one style from the next, but I think this is fantastic, so earthy and sensual........
glad i stopped by
pax A

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Absolutely outstanding offering with great imagery!!

Oh Ed saw the thigh thingy and lost the moral of it I guess..lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Hey, pretty well done, Mr. MT...not bad. The French Sonnet form is pretty challenging, but yields strong results, no? I figured, as soon as we discussed this form you wouldn't be able to resist trying your hand at it...real artists live for challenges.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Great images you have created here.

Reviewed by Graham Donnachaidh
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Hello MP...
it's been awhile since I've visited ....see you have not lost the muse..
I feel this poem's mood so very earthy cold and heavy.
as if lost souls struggled to regain something which is lost..and never to be found.
I keep re-reading it..
Cheers..
G

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
this is wonderful...thank you for introducing me to this form

Susan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Okay, Mp, not being to very intelligent, I have no clue what "villanelle" would be nor does my Word Web program...but what you wrote could turn me on, even in my old and depleted age...LOL! If that is what it was supposed to do, then it did its job, if not, sorry...Ed

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
excellent write


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