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Aliens report back
By Audrey Coatesworth
Last edited: Saturday, October 20, 2012
Posted: Wednesday, July 27, 2011

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This is a fictious report taken back from visiting 'aliens' - commenting on some present day behaviours.

Aliens report back


If spirits from outer space decided to survey life on earth.


This is the kind of report I believe they would take back to their leader.


Report on Planet earth in 2010 earth time- ready to be stored into infinity.


At the request of our Great Leader, we returned to Planet Earth, with the same group as visited in 1950, earth time. At that time we saw much devastation in the land we visited, but concluded that an evil force had visited but that the people had survived. We concluded that the ball shape called the head was the seat of their intelligence and that the body was driven by the pump they called the ‘heart’, in the upper chamber of their main body. There was obviously a strong link between the seat of their intelligence and this pump, and that link gave them strength and purpose, courage and endurance.


Now our findings are different. We revisited the same area of land. The devastation of buildings was repaired. However, it appeared that another, yet more sinister evil force is pervading the earth. This felt very uncomfortable to our senses. Though there had been small pockets of this same feeling before, the source was largely unknown to us and most people had been unaffected.


This force works in much more devious ways. Our main concern was that it seems to have been able to divert the seat of intelligence of those it has touched away from the head to two other areas. These areas have much less awareness yet wield great power in determining a human’s actions. The focus of the evil force is both sinister and very clever and aims to make humans want only pleasure.


One of these two areas is shown to be at the upper end of the main body and is the receptacle for food and fluids which the humans need to survive. The evil force is using that to gain entrance to the individual through concoctions which initially give pleasure but which, once tasted, many want in excess. The other is at the lower end of the main body, and between the legs. We had previously decided that this area was primarily the source of the pleasure of love and procreation and again was linked to the seat of intelligence. We are most perplexed at the actions we now see as it appears that these linkages are gradually being broken. We have seen in our travels that this shift in power in many humans leads them along a path of loss of love and leads eventually to illness, and finally death at a premature time.


Though it seems to target the younger members, this evil force affects all levels in their society. We concluded, that should its power persist  then this planet will offer us nothing of value nor be able to receive our information or help and we should best avoid it and leave it to its own destruction.


However, we noticed and were relieved that there are people of all ages who have not succumbed to that evil force and if they can stay strong or even manage to help others to regain their seat of intelligence in the head and the link to the pump of life, then planet earth may yet regain its beauty and skill.


The Great Leader listened. He remains of the opinion that, whatever frailties we find in the human race, the good force will always be stronger than any evil force. He has suggested that we return in another thirty earth years for a brief sortie, but this would be our final assessment. His last words on the matter were,


 ‘They have choice and so have I. If they do not want what we have to offer, then that opportunity will not be given again.’




 This article can be listened to on a video on the Secondary School Poems site which I have made for teenagers.



Web Site Secondary school poems

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