Losing My Religion: Beds Are Burning
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Sage Sweetwater
Tuesday, March 07, 2006
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Totally sexual altar, she guards my cargo from bandits
My God, that's me in the corner, that's me in the spotlight, losing my religion.
You lie naked, scattered on the mattress, exhausted from wandering through my spotlight of fame.
You hear the echoes of my ancient city where caravans of veiled women paused to trade with me, each one of them guarding my precious cargo of books, beads, and feathers, from bandits, on to the next watering hole of women.
Stopping to drink from their wells, gathering sexuality for the journey, they're all waiting for me, beckoning me like a distant star, even the pretty camel driver of two millenia ago.
I am so thirsty for it, lots of it, what a relief to have seen you on the red sandstone ledge, waving to me after paying your toll.
My God, that's me in the corner, that's me in the spotlight, losing my religion, with you ancient Petra, with fluent fingers.
My God, that's me in the corner, that's me in the spotlight, losing my religion, reorganized into cooperative venture.
When I'm thirsty, out of water, you're a good place to know.
My God, that's me in the corner, that's me in the spotlight, losing my religion, lying naked on the mattress, cord attached to your canteen, lowering it into your hole, filling my mouth to the brim before I strike out across the flint-strewn sand.
Come with me and my camel driver from two millenia ago, on to the next watering hole of women.
My God, that's me in the corner, that's me in the spotlight, losing my religion ...
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
3/21/2006 |
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| Love the incorporation of historical scenarios into this sensual tale of lost religion, your work resonates for me because you incorporate so much in it, that it's possible to read them over again and find something new, some new way to look at it, and each time it still retains it's passionate flair! |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
3/8/2006 |
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| I agree with Suzie...brilliant write! |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
3/8/2006 |
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Dear Sage
This is brilliant! I love how you incorporated wonderful REM into your wonderful works! 'Beds Are Burning' is the title of an old popular Aussie band called 'Midnight Oil' ... Lyrics go: 'How do you sleep while our beds are burning' referring to the atrocious treatment our Aborigines have suffered as a result of white invasion ... Australia Day's true title 'Invasion Day' ... similiar to the American Native Indians phight, so I know you understand sister Sage!
Love & Kinship Suzie xox :-)
(I don't go to Mardi Gras anymore ... and they don't throw lovely purple beads like your Mardi Gras ... more like flyers for further parties in the future! Such a party place! Greater when young!!) |
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| Reviewed by Jena Ayro |
3/8/2006 |
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This made my body cry
out, to feed U'r thirst
U can have my canteen,
it's ever flowing
Whew, the heat, AHHHH U
naked, OHHHH, this has made
A feeling, that needs to
find the next watering hole
U'r at
Nice, and Thanks |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/8/2006 |
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| Fantastic write! |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
3/8/2006 |
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| Sage you are so adept at setting fires and feeding them, a great write as ususal. |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
3/8/2006 |
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Well when you manage to set the bed afire it shows loving has been elevated to an act of worship. Have you ever read any of Burton's translation of Tales From The Arabian Nights? Some of the more risque tales portray women very differently from what we expect of the modern Middle East. But of course even after 1500 years shrouded by the hijab, the essential woman still exists, patiently waiting for the return of The Goddess.
best
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/8/2006 |
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Sage,
Fantastic writing; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/8/2006 |
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Sage,
What a way to lose it! WOW--you set the Den ablaze, and methinks me monitor melted. Good show!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/8/2006 |
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| Like Ed, I have no idea about the song, I'm just another of the fuddy-duddy's, my last great song to love was sung by CCR, know-whot-I-mean? Don't have to know about REM to know that I delved into this poem and wallered(?) around in it, purelyu as a voyeur I have to admit, but still . . . I was satisified with what I saw. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/8/2006 |
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I just love that REM song, Michael Stipe the lead singer is an amazing talent, just like you Sage
Genius is born to those who have been touched by God, and you have the complete arsenal and repetoire of literary and expressive talents
This is a firecracker of a sensual write, that reaches deep into the soul of passion
Peter |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/7/2006 |
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Your poetry sets more than beds burning Sage;-)
ahoy there fire in the den!;-)
eT |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/7/2006 |
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| the sexulaity of spiritual design is replenished in the "watering hole of women" ... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
3/7/2006 |
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| I have always enjoyed that song, though I have no idea who does it, someone newer I assume, after my time, music wise...and this poem, not too old for me, written by a young lady of talent who allows the rest of us mortals to see into her immortality...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/7/2006 |
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You found this oasis with your Muse.
Excellent!
Susan |
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