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Losing My Religion: Beds Are Burning
by Sage Sweetwater
Tuesday, March 07, 2006
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Totally sexual altar, she guards my cargo from bandits


My God, that's me in the corner,
that's me in the spotlight,
losing my religion.

You lie naked, scattered on the
mattress, exhausted from wandering
through my spotlight of fame.

You hear the echoes of my
ancient city where caravans
of veiled women paused to
trade with me, each one of
them guarding my precious
cargo of books, beads, and
feathers,  from bandits, on to 
the next watering hole
of women.

Stopping to drink from their
wells, gathering sexuality for the
journey, they're all waiting for
me, beckoning me like a distant
star, even the pretty camel driver
of two millenia ago.

I am so thirsty for it, lots of it,
what a relief to have seen you on
the red sandstone ledge, waving to
me after paying your toll.

My God, that's me in the corner,
that's me in the spotlight,
losing my religion, with you
ancient Petra, with fluent fingers.

My God, that's me in the corner,
that's me in the spotlight,
losing my religion, reorganized into
cooperative venture.

When I'm thirsty, out of water,
you're a good place to know.

My God, that's me in the corner,
that's me in the spotlight,
losing my religion, lying naked
on the mattress, cord attached
to your canteen, lowering it into
your hole, filling my mouth
to the brim before I strike out
across the flint-strewn sand.

Come with me and my camel
driver from two millenia ago,
on to the next watering hole
of women.

My God, that's me in the corner,
that's me in the spotlight,
losing my religion ...

Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman







 

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 3/21/2006
Love the incorporation of historical scenarios into this sensual tale of lost religion, your work resonates for me because you incorporate so much in it, that it's possible to read them over again and find something new, some new way to look at it, and each time it still retains it's passionate flair!
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 3/8/2006
I agree with Suzie...brilliant write!
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 3/8/2006
Dear Sage
This is brilliant! I love how you incorporated wonderful REM into your wonderful works! 'Beds Are Burning' is the title of an old popular Aussie band called 'Midnight Oil' ... Lyrics go: 'How do you sleep while our beds are burning' referring to the atrocious treatment our Aborigines have suffered as a result of white invasion ... Australia Day's true title 'Invasion Day' ... similiar to the American Native Indians phight, so I know you understand sister Sage!
Love & Kinship Suzie xox :-)
(I don't go to Mardi Gras anymore ... and they don't throw lovely purple beads like your Mardi Gras ... more like flyers for further parties in the future! Such a party place! Greater when young!!)
Reviewed by Jena Ayro 3/8/2006
This made my body cry
out, to feed U'r thirst

U can have my canteen,
it's ever flowing

Whew, the heat, AHHHH U
naked, OHHHH, this has made


A feeling, that needs to
find the next watering hole
U'r at

Nice, and Thanks
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/8/2006
Fantastic write!
Reviewed by Only A Poet 3/8/2006
Sage you are so adept at setting fires and feeding them, a great write as ususal.
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 3/8/2006
Well when you manage to set the bed afire it shows loving has been elevated to an act of worship. Have you ever read any of Burton's translation of Tales From The Arabian Nights? Some of the more risque tales portray women very differently from what we expect of the modern Middle East. But of course even after 1500 years shrouded by the hijab, the essential woman still exists, patiently waiting for the return of The Goddess.
best
Ian
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/8/2006
Sage,

Fantastic writing; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/8/2006
Sage,

What a way to lose it! WOW--you set the Den ablaze, and methinks me monitor melted. Good show!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/8/2006
Like Ed, I have no idea about the song, I'm just another of the fuddy-duddy's, my last great song to love was sung by CCR, know-whot-I-mean? Don't have to know about REM to know that I delved into this poem and wallered(?) around in it, purelyu as a voyeur I have to admit, but still . . . I was satisified with what I saw.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 3/8/2006
I just love that REM song, Michael Stipe the lead singer is an amazing talent, just like you Sage
Genius is born to those who have been touched by God, and you have the complete arsenal and repetoire of literary and expressive talents
This is a firecracker of a sensual write, that reaches deep into the soul of passion
Peter
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/7/2006
Your poetry sets more than beds burning Sage;-)
ahoy there fire in the den!;-)

eT
Reviewed by jude forese 3/7/2006
the sexulaity of spiritual design is replenished in the "watering hole of women" ...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/7/2006
I have always enjoyed that song, though I have no idea who does it, someone newer I assume, after my time, music wise...and this poem, not too old for me, written by a young lady of talent who allows the rest of us mortals to see into her immortality...Ed
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 3/7/2006
You found this oasis with your Muse.

Excellent!
Susan


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