Passing Through (poem) by Venera Di Bella Barles on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 23, 2012

It begins it. I have been here before, as I could tell.
For finding: that myself I have reborn
But not seen, is forever to persist
To gather around the seasons of space with the everlastingness of event
With the layered energy as it is made of things.
Into the logical fiber of the tribute: a thought arises
And stays on course, slowly progressing, not done.
By fear: the fear that�s been since forever,
In the same space the inseparable normal good
Being passed through mankind
Came accessible to me: I fade into remoteness

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 18, 2008

We are here for you always dear hearts, it doesn't matter whether it is today or what. Your penmanship is good and you write from the heart and I like your style.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

Good thinking and poetry, short but sweet and makes you think of where you are and coming from. Keep up the good work. Peace to you and yours.

Reviewed by Chase Von

Reviewed on September 26, 2007

:)

We're all passing through:) And sadly, we might enjoy more if we weren't always reaching for a moment that hasn't arrived yet and ignoring the ones in the present...

Warmest wishes to you
Chase

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on June 25, 2007

Yes we are all passing through to the eternal tomorrow, your question is profound and creative.

Thanks for sharing and keep the faith our best days are ahead of us.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Reviewed by Ken Chartrand

Reviewed on March 18, 2007

Hi! friend Venera,
Enjoyed the poem "Passing Through". Makes one think. Kinda matrix and passionate dreaming. Nice work. Please feel free to visit my site at www.freewebs/kendoo or at meettheauthors group and here in the 'den'.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

time does pass to quickly--good write and i enjoyed your bio page

Reviewed by Dawn Mullan

Reviewed on November 29, 2006

Good read. I often feel this way; time is quick. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Arthur Tugman

Reviewed on June 29, 2006

Venera, it is a pleasure to read your poetry.
Arthur

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2005

nope....I'm not..darn..LOL
Great piece..love it!

Vesna*

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on March 11, 2005

A wonderful sense of humor discovered here. Ah, confusion. The state I live in most often!

Sherry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Intriguing verses, Venera. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Poet, one can easily see that you are a great addition to the pages of poetry here at �The Den.� I enjoyed the read, and I just do hope it isn�t too late to find out whether or not I actually was here yesterday or shall be here tomorrow. But, sooner or later I might be able to determine if I was here today� lol. Welcome to �The Den.� May you and yours have a great holiday. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Venera,
I'm so confused. Sometimes I don't know if I'm coming or going. ( lol ) Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

We may never know if we made it or not!
Interesting thoughts on, tomorrow.
Welcome to the Den!

Lisa

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Creative theme. Enjoyed.