and passion fuels them both
sometimes lust disguises itself as love
but love always reveals
each with erotic & sensual intimacies
combined together as one beautiful experience
Love's Bounty
Vickie
"Extends beyond eternity" is so true when the love is real, beautiful writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
How sad and strange it is in these fast modern days to think that bodies often heat together while spirits remain imprisoned, apart. Your poem goes a long way to reminding us that we ought to settle for nothing less than the ideal of spiritual and physical union... 'tis a consummation devoutly to be wished. Good write, Poetess.
Richard, I promise that this didn't come from your poem. I wrote it in the spring of 2004. It was originally entitled, "Sex" and has already been in a few of my publications. But I'd love to read yours. It will be interesting to see if they are coincidentally similar.
Poetess, Like this a lot. I can't find it right now, but this one reminds me of one of my old poems in which I said something comparing "making love, or just having sex.... to a live concert, or Memorex." This will prompt me to take the time to look it up.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Well spoken!
Richard
sometimes lust disguises itself as love
but love always reveals
each with erotic & sensual intimacies
combined together as one beautiful experience
Love's Bounty
Vickie
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Thanks Dick
Blessings,
Christine
Regis
PEACE and LOVE
TONY
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