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Lemon Drops (Part 2 of a trilogy)
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Sweet and Sour

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He rocked gently back and forth on his front porch

Listening to the creaking floor boards as they kept pace

With the ping of the raindrops as they dripped from

From the crown of the old oak overhead and danced across

The rusty tin roof covering the open deck

Spring fragrances filled the soft balmy air but the blossoms

On the old lemon tree were the most pronounced and

Still his favorite

He reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out a lemon drop

He carefully unwrapped it and slid it into his mouth

And began to swish it about mixing the sweet and sour flavors

Fifty years, he thought to himself

Had it really been fifty years

He reached back into his pocket and

Felt the tattered edges of the old photograph and

Slowly raised it to his misting eyes

He gazed at Ruby’s soft smile until the tears blurred it out

He closed them for a moment

He felt her hair tickling his chin as they rested against the tree

And her delicate nose nudging his neck as they

Watched the billowing clouds conspire against the azure sky

He heard the soft thud of an over ripe lemon as it hit the ground

And he opened his eyes

Lemons were scattered all about

Yellow freckles on the bright green face of the unkempt lawn

He had kept the vow he made to himself after she left

And never harvested so much as a single lemon from that tree

Such a waste of what might have been

But never was

He sighed and slipped the photograph back into his pocket

And retrieved another lemon drop

He had struggled through another day without her

He got up out of his rocker and as he shuffled to the kitchen

His teardrops kept pace with the ping of the raindrops

As they dripped from the crown of the old oak overhead

And danced across the rusty tin roof covering the open deck

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2009  Patrick A. Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Lemon Drops (Part 2 of a trilogy)"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
vivid visuals capture the emotional substance of this poem ..

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
I find these verses to be most soul-reaching, Patrick; very moving. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
Like life, bittersweet. Seek the sweet. . .e

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
A rocking chair is the best tool to stir old memories on a raining day.
Like how you put us there, visual, sound, smell and taste, like an old master guiding your hand you gave us a gem.

Georg


Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
I like how the lemon drop, sour to the core causing the explosion of the sense of taste in one's mouth, carries over to the explosion of memory and the twisting of senses and impressions. Nice work.

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
absolutely a great write, love is timeless thanks

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
beautiful details take the reader into the depths of this one


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