ahh we see this other facet of 'patrick'again...so so touching this was and with such an emotional question that all readers will give pause to and remember their own times of hindsight.
Very profoundly philosophical. Not your usual humorous or natural poem. But the dog gives me a clue. I have noticed how a perfectly calm and friendly dog will suddenly turn vicious and do great harm to innocent things like other animals and children. I think you're trying to alert us to the fact that we have a tendency to "fly off the handle" to easily when we could have just let the problem evaporate in time.
I have bent just about as far as this old body can...I am creaking from the bending...maybe you can suggest what else I can do to make things better...? JD
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
poignant read
Sandie
Peace be with you
William
Ron
Regis