I am mesmerized by the power of this pen - memorable lines - exquisitely penned - my new favorite of yours - saving this one to get lost in, again and again -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Someone lusted? I guess all us men and women are
guilty of that, Taking action would be the wrong
thing maybe?
You have a neat style
Ron
I love the cadence of this and the way the writer reaches out but also directs her images to the reader, I cannot speak for others but I think most males will feel this one deeply and search back to see if they are guilty of past victimization. Very nice write indeed.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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This read gave me thought to love's passions & then to a betrayal, and forgiveness as you so well stated in your last stanza.
Embrasse'
Vickie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I am mesmerized by the power of this pen - memorable lines - exquisitely penned - my new favorite of yours - saving this one to get lost in, again and again -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
guilty of that, Taking action would be the wrong
thing maybe?
You have a neat style
Ron
Be always safe,
Karen
Fee