So good to see you Donna, it's been too long;-) Love your ethereal
sequences making us really concentrate to get the gold nuggets of
your intentions. Hope you stay awhile;-)
The title has a cosmic bent like the poetic cinematographer/Quesinberry has taken it to another plane ... ethereal as in do otherworldly folk (if you believe) do what earthlings do?... a fan on the porch of the Milky Way...a concept, huh? a volvoesque humming over a comet, how would that sound? Pinot wine in the tasting room of Pleiades! Visualization like this perhaps suggests that the author be a filmmaker, DQ...
Nice work Donna...you take us along that visitational experience where we see the effects of not mere second hand smoke but more of an inhaling roller coaster as it churns the talky talk of moonlite conversation...a good visit?....yes...
Donna, Quite an exceptional piece. I read it twice. The second time, I began to feel the writer's thoughts, as if I was in that moment when those thoughts became words on the computer and I could feel your heart beating as you wrote this amazing piece.
Thank you for sharing this..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Donna,
the images have exceptional impact whether deliberately blurred or in the sharpest focus and the vocabulary to sustain them is rich and original in many places. I'm savouring this.
John
When one ponders what is what has been and sees the errors of life seemingly harmless as smoke exhaled from your lungs one can see why what we do does effect all of us in the end.
surreal, yes...i am surrounded by images in and out of focus, thoughts and nonthoughts, yes, and smoke... i love this, donna.
why has it taken me so long to get here? -gene.
"he loves to touch my mouth."
This line, to me, subjectively, focuses this seemingly surreal piece as a series of momentary impressions - metaphorically speaking in a circular region whose area is indicated by the length of its radius, or realistically speaking as what the eye captures at any given moment as children run and play unfettered by the opinions of adults.
Yankee Doodle Daddy is a historical Appalachian Family Saga. The story follows a mother's reckoning as she struggles to survive and keep her four daughters alive.
Exploring the impact of literary icon Flannery O'Connor's noted legacy on the cultural realities of modern-day America, the world, and a certain author.
Best Wishes..
Sam
Most enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you
William
Truly an intricate poem, and hark! For there does blow the winds of change in the cigarette smoke!
So beautiful, and delicately complex.
Mark
sequences making us really concentrate to get the gold nuggets of
your intentions. Hope you stay awhile;-)
Love,
ET
~D.
Love,
Sage
Art Sun...
Thank you for sharing this..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
the images have exceptional impact whether deliberately blurred or in the sharpest focus and the vocabulary to sustain them is rich and original in many places. I'm savouring this.
John
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Be always safe,
Karen
why has it taken me so long to get here? -gene.
This line, to me, subjectively, focuses this seemingly surreal piece as a series of momentary impressions - metaphorically speaking in a circular region whose area is indicated by the length of its radius, or realistically speaking as what the eye captures at any given moment as children run and play unfettered by the opinions of adults.
A synaptic thriller -
Regis