DONE! (poem) by Jms Bell on AuthorsDen

DONE!
by Jms Bell → (All Poetry by Jms Bell)
Thursday, July 2, 2020 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Consider; There is ‘nothing’ we can achieve on earth that can be matched in any way or that is even remotely equal to…what God has Prepared for us. Then, why are we still here? There is, really, only one purpose; We've still got a lot of ‘stuff’ hanging on…and we are still being changed, that is…perfected, for our eternal destination…our Heavenly Home!

The carvings…litter my journey’s floor… I’m not…done Still being chiseled, I’m lead where we’ve been before and I am so aware…I’m not…done Those unconquered places… we revisit, again... are not at all about now, but the end Growth, so vital and necessary… is taught on paths…made revelatory Each ordained hour, it goes on Your Hands gently bend, mold…dawn to dawn Yet, one day, one fine day, me…made perfect… with this earthy race over and won, will alight with You…Home, without a speck …Done! Psalm 119:71, 2^nd Corn 3:18, 1Corn 2:9 copyright; 7/1/20-jmsbell
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Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 5, 2020

To me, homogeneoucity is bland with everything merging into a single, "perfect form." Much preferable to me is a range of color and form that is naturally the result of slight variation in gene, leading to wonderful, beautiful humans wherever one goes. Preferably without cosmetics attempting to change hair color, skin complexion, and all the other devices devised to make humans supposedly more beautiful than they naturally are. That's why I like diversity so much and don't like any gods tinkering with us making us all the same.

Ron

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 4, 2020

POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on July 3, 2020

The path to perfection is difficult indeed, and without a supreme goal we cannot begin to fully understand until we are indeed "done!"

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 2, 2020

You words are so uplifting as usual. I actually got rev'ed up reading this full of comfort piece of work. You are so inspired and inspiring!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

LOVE this Joyce. Thank you and God Bless.

ann

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane

It is our utmost desire to spent eternity with the King of kings. A thought provoking poem. Well penned!