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Once Upon A Time
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 Once Upon A Time

 

She has sat alone

Upon many cold stones

Worried, and all alone.

 

No one can comfort

They try to understand

Still lost in a never land.

 

She’s a dark shadow

Hidden amongst many

Sunshine trying to rise.

 

Once upon a time

Standing hopeless above all

She once again falls.

 

Deborah Ann Tornillo

Copyright, 2011


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Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on May 15, 2011
I fall all the time and each time it is harder to get back up but I have to. I think to myself why me? Why won't the black cloud go away? I have done nothing wrong to deserve all this pain, then I realize it's because I can handle it! I will never give up no matter how many times I fall...If I knew this girl I would give her a hug and tell her everything will be ok and that the sun will shine again....Lean on me when your not strong, I will be your friend and help you carry on...We all need to feel love when we are weak. No one knows your weak if you hide. I know because i have been this girl you have written about...She needs to step out of Never land and grab a hand of someone she knows and trust...Take care, Chessly

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2011
Oh my so sad indeed...sighhh....Hugsss

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 12, 2011
Although dark this is very well done with a lot of strong emotion vibrating from each verse.
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 12, 2011
So very sad.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 12, 2011
But she will arise again with dignity. Right now she is over loaded with others problems. Good articulation on a very powerful poem.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Another lost soul desperately trying to see the light and feel its warmth, very tender...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
The despondent and alone and hopelessness. We can try to help, and maybe say a word or phrase that clicks within her and she can put it all aside and start taking baby steps.


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