every word and line of this poem squeezed my heart. The cadence really helped create the sense that what is being said is very important. No doubt this write puts into words the feelings and thoughts of more people than we will ever know of. May God use your poetry to speak to our generation and the ones that may follow.
I have seen this happen many times . Its hard to grow old and face the loneliness and dispair of not really being wanted by family.. Your poem touches ones heart and brings the reality of many to light!...M
Oh Deborah beautifully written! so heart wrenching, yet so true!
I'm glad that you are there to hug and hold her, God your Heavenly Father will always bless the works of your hands!
How sad. We seem to always forget our eldery, and that's a shame. I don't know if you like Dan Fogelberg, but he did a song called "Windows and Walls" that described this perfectly.
GOD BLESS
TMN
Gratefully,
Dixie Dawn Michelle
I'm glad that you are there to hug and hold her, God your Heavenly Father will always bless the works of your hands!
Love And Prayers
Always!!!
How sad. We seem to always forget our eldery, and that's a shame. I don't know if you like Dan Fogelberg, but he did a song called "Windows and Walls" that described this perfectly.
Mary