Intriguing - great flow - there must be a bottom level to the meaning - I'm into the third tier or do I read too much into this interesting work?! Nice work.
The audacity of hope is that we are free to express it. It cannot be shouted down by ignorance and doubt. Talk is cheap, but in time, the truth prevails.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Making every word count -- now, that is poetry.
x:)x Phyllis x:)x