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Heaven: The Legend
by Carmen Ruggero → (All Poetry by Carmen Ruggero)
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Heaven: The Legend



It came to me in a dream,
in the instant,
between awake and asleep.


I saw God’s angels.
Saw them spread their golden wings,
and soar across the blue.


I saw them smiling –
their hair flying to the wind,
resting on luminous white clouds.


I heard their shining voices
rise to the Father
in heavenly praise; yes Him


who created man, and woman
to bring forth the fruit of their love.
For that’s how He saw eternity:


Through human passion, unending,
repeating the blessed cycle of life.


Then the angels’ voices faltered,
discordant, harsh; I turned to see
their faces crumble, their wings a cinder.


The heavens darkened,
and from the earth below,
jet black speared through the clouds.


I opened my eyes; it wasn’t a dream.
I was in hell, breathing its terror.


The faint voice of a child:
“Our Father…… please?”
And then there was silence.


Carmen Ruggero .2004


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 Reviews of "Heaven: The Legend"
Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Captivative and thought-provoking. Good and Bad must ultimately be digital information, and return to the essence of space. Franz

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
My Carmen, what a dream!--one that none of us hopes comes true.

--sweet peace 2 U always,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 8, 2004
Wonderful poetry. I especially enjoyed the ending.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
Poet: Very powerful and the ending just… Blew me away! Bravo!

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on May 6, 2004
Wow...great ending.. this was a very powerful, thought provoking poem Carmen...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on May 5, 2004
Powerful writing...from the beauty and golden vision to the terrifying ending.

Gripping poem.
Gina

Reviewed on May 5, 2004
This was outstanding, powerful and so deeply stirring, Loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 4, 2004
Stunning Carmen!!

Just so beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Exceptionally well written poem...this is stunningly beautiful, Carmen! ~Z~

Reviewed on May 3, 2004
"Heaven: The Legend" delivers an inspiring writing.

I have enjoyed a touch of innocence and the aroma of gratitude.

I Salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Carmen....thanks for your suggestion dear friend( I am not with me tonight)....excellent write from you yet again...BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Carmen, what an experience!Exceptional poetry.
I too was jolted by the finale!

Reviewed on May 3, 2004
This was most heartfelt imagery indeed!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
A captivating piece, Carmen. The ending is unexpected and leaves me deep in thought. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Wonderful poem, with a quite unexpected ending. Very deep and thought-provoking, Carmen.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
even the plans of the Father can be thwarted ... this is an extrememly profound and well written poem ...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
BRILLIANT use of shock therapy at the end...Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
BANG, the finish surprised me, or rather the second to last stanza...


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