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Divertissement (Dance Without a Plot)
by Carmen Ruggero → (All Poetry by Carmen Ruggero)
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This is a new form for me. I submitted for the Form Over Substance Challenge at the Starlite Cafe. It is called The Round. Last word of line matches first word of next line. Rhyme scheme: aa bb cc dd.

Photography by Munoz


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Soft the spotlight spills; she leaps to her toes
toes some times fitted in pink satin bows,
bows and arrows, Eros craftily aims
aims for his heart, hers is in flames,
flames leaping – pas de deux, she is dreaming…

dreaming him, wishing him, silently screaming,
screaming! His name… a fleeting spark in time
time… and verses lost to similar rhyme.

Carmen Ruggero©2005

 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Divertissement (Dance Without a Plot)"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Another winner --?!!! You are a true champion, m'lady. As for the idea of losing you, "miss" is far too weak. Can't bear the thought, so take extra, extra good care of yourself. Writing hard, I know. . .and that is great. Just. . .take care! Love you, 'Pea' xox

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 4, 2006
I really liked this one Carmen,excellent!
So you are a member of the starlite cafe too?Me too.Small world.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2006
i know nothing really of form poetry but I do know a well crafted poem the beautiful is endless in this "ROUND"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
Excellent work Carmen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
intriguing form and meter ... flows nicely ... your work the theme very nicely, Carmen ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 2, 2006
This new form suits you well, Carmen - quite a poem!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on January 1, 2006
interesting form and originality shines through. Dawn

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2006
Looks difficult, that's probably why I've never gone there. Nice work.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 1, 2006
Wow! what a gem you created here Carmen!I love the picture, I love the topic, and most of all the beautiful ambiance you gave your ballerina to dance in,just exquisite poetry! The form is superb, and your last lines a most fitting finale!Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Sharon Palmer
Reviewed on January 1, 2006
Awesome work, Carmen! And I love the form! You've done a wonderful, most admirable job with it. Beautiful!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on January 1, 2006
Most interesting style and form you propogate here Carmen
The Round certainly leaves much room to mamuevere and improvise, you accomplish it with grace and panache !
The picture is spectacular
Love
Peter


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