Mr. Spiderman (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

I'm glad you finally got him off you! Those are some awful bite marks he left!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Some spiders deserve to be splattered. Guess you wouldn't find my plastic spider funny? Totally understandable.

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

OWWWWW must been pretty wound up to give you that many bites...perhaps he just liked the taste lol. You may even start to develop super spider powers and start spinning webs etc hehehe.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

My goodness, 17 times? That spider musta loved your sweetness! What kind of spider did that? Hope you're okay. Scary but good poem.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

wow...don't think I like the spiders in your area, looks like they have an agenda against female legs....great write Tinks...

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

must have been a super spider to bite you so many times ... wow ...

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Tink- that had to stingggg.. HOpe your keeping a good eye on that Target he made of your arm- Wow! GREAT writing Girl- LAdy Sheee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Look on the bright side, Tinky; you will now have super powers like Spiderman; and are you sure just one little spider did all that??!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Try Drinking White Vinegar,i.e. Insects Do not Like It!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Tinka

*shivers* I hate spiders, too. I've had several encounters with brown recluses, they're AWFUL!

Gad, that looks painful--hope you feel better SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Guess spiders aint fussy...

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

It was obviuosly a male spider.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

That doesn't look good Tinka. If it were on your stomach or back I'd wonder if you had Shingles. How the hell did a spider bite you so many times? Were you walking in the woods? You are lucky you didn't get a bad infection from the bites. Take care. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

wow..I never knew a spider could do that..I was always told they were beneficial...YIKES!! I almost forgot good write!!

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Tinks,

Yikes! 17 times? Be on the lookout for spider powers now. That's how it happens, you know.

Spooky stuff.

Peace,

B

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Dear Tinks,

EINAAAAA dit lyk aaglik ??? Good write, but damn that doesn't look good at all, best you see the doc asap, no time for games!!!

Take care my friend.

warm hugs and love
Elga xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

That looks more like an arm to me! Where on earth did this happen. I'd stay away if I were you, unless you are only using it for the premise of your poem, which seems to make your spiderman a bit kinky ;-)hehe...hope uyou really didn't get bit like that, you'd be in hospital no?
Take care Tinka,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

*OUCH*

excellent poem; but a painful picture! i hope you feel better soon; you are in my prayers today!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :( *cringing*

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Oh my! That must have hurt. Good poem.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Good one Tinka. I'm sorry he found you so succulent and left his marks behind.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Jeez! You'll do ANYTHING that will give you an excuse to show off those legs, huh, Tinka?