Oh Gentle Breeze (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 25, 2017

So many have said it better than I.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2012

strong emotion, heartfelt longing, tenderly expressed, lovingly conveyed

Reviewed on January 20, 2012

A poem that has the reader brought in and feels the pain of the forlorn of unrequited love.

Powerfully written, one can relate to the hurting. Prolly more bitter than sweet.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on January 15, 2012

Except for 1 s missing on caress, the story in poem form is great. The feelings of anxiety, sorrow, bewilderment and doubt are all there. I can see the tears in the eyes of the speaker, whose heart has been broken beyond repair. Something I know a little about. Where indeed gentle breeze, is your soft caress?

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 13, 2012

Beautifully melancholy, Tinka.
Peace, Carole~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

good work cuz ...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

Thank you for sharing this most heart-felt reflection!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

Tinka,

Your cousin is quite talented. You can fell the pain and anquish in her work.

Mary

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

That voice will be heard again.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

I FEEL MUCH PAIN IN YOUR POEM TINKA.
I'VE MISSED THAT GENTLE BREEZE OF LIFE MYSELF.
WITH LOVE ..RON

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

A beautifully written metaphor for lost love.

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 7, 2012

always a wonderful write
always a pleasure to read
love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 7, 2012

Beautiful poem, Tinka (and Deon)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 7, 2012

Poetry runs in your family, Mz Tinka...& Deon's write is just wonderfully sweet without being bitter...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2012

I think this line should read as "never to be caressed." But I can "feel" what is expressed in this poem. I have lived this situation. Thank you for sharing, TinkaSweets. Love and best wishes,

Regis