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Lake Bliss
by Sara A Mazzolini → (All Poetry by Sara A Mazzolini)
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Song Lyrics by Sara Adeline Mazzolini I swim in the lake of bliss Blue paradise, land of meadow and mist The seagull soars heavenward Such brilliance, such dalliance in the sky! The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight You bask in the sun of bliss She climbs the blue crests of midnight The soaring flight beyond the real that will the Truth reveal The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight I bathe in the lake of bliss Dawn heralds the trip to Paradise You praise the new-born sun Blue birds burst into song The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight I catch a glimpse of unknown depths Unfathomable and sublime You discover dream riddles soon to be deciphered The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight Tell me the tale so long forgotten The lover's now lost and forsaken Her soul is torn till the storm subsides Your long lost friend has passed you by The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight I stare at splinters of light splattered in the floor I catch light motes in my hand Your spirit roams the world The story of the soul unfurls (repeat) The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight Today the whirlwind blows The tide ebbs and flows Seawaves splatter on the shore I love you even more The storm arises, the storm subsides The city of fire is so alive In your eyes gleam eternal light I drown in your eyes tonight * Sara Adeline Mazzolini, copyright 2012 - 2013 Spindrifter – Lake Bliss (2013)

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 31, 2013

Gee Sara, I love the lines of poetic song.

It is just the font and the small size letters made it take so long.

So please make them bigger and I am sure more will stop an read your art.

May peace be with you,

John Michael Domino

"Miracles are everywhere - we just need to be aware!" JMD

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 30, 2013

May be a bit long for a song. Most songs these days are just a few lines with a whole lot of repetition. I like the message and the mood.

Ron