This is dedicated to my father and sister who are out there riding the tails of meteors and skeet shooting those falling stars. It must be one heck of an adventure.
Susan
Tonight the sky is overcast I couldn't find your star It was then that I paniced And I wondered where you were There are moments in my lifetime When my passions are layed bare My emotions run with shadows And restlessly I dare To taste the dreams of ventures... In the realm of the unknown And fly into the heavens To finally seek a home Where you are there awaiting me With arms extended wide To sit with you and ponder Should I stay up here and ride? I could catch the tails of comets Ride through the Milky Way Say "Hello" to Orion Then be on my way Passed the planet of Venus On to Jupiter and Mars Dust the Cosmos with my laughter Put more twinkle in the stars I could swing from wings of angels I would tickle all their feet Tie their hair up all in tangles Then gently fall asleep With the wings of heavens shadows As my dreams take me to Earth I would waken with the laughter Of life and all it's worth I thank the world for all that's good As I pray with all my might I can hear your laughter echo As it touches me tonight.
"Dust the Cosmos with my laughter
Put more twinkle in the stars
I could swing from wings of angels
I would tickle all their feet
Tie their hair up all in tangles
Then gently fall asleep" sounds like something i'd love to do
Susan, this is such a warm and endearing poem of love. Such a wonderful dedication to your father and sister. Excellently written......Yes
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Susan this was just so good, I actually heard the echos rivet outer space in th is dandy lion, it seemed like hilarity roaming throughout the universe dear, ty Al
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
An absolutely precious journey through the glorious heavens above, Susan!!!… Wonderful dedication to your father and sister!!!… Incredible poetry!!!… Thank you for sharing it.
wonderful stuff! i love to watch the skies at night myself, and look at the stars and see the meteors! (or, if i am lucky enough, to see the aurora borealis!!) thanks for sharing this lovely write, susan!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Brilliant just sheer brilliant write and one i'd be proud to have written, a heck of a story and one i just adore, very well done, this has most definately made my day...take care...Mark x
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"Dust the Cosmos with my laughter
Put more twinkle in the stars
I could swing from wings of angels
I would tickle all their feet
Tie their hair up all in tangles
Then gently fall asleep" sounds like something i'd love to do
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
excellent write
William
You touched me with this one lady!!
Love Tinka
Peace~
LP
Superb poem, Kudo's!