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Piss and Vinegar
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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This may explain the girl in me who comes up now and then...the rebel part!
~SKdeV~


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Dad's voice creeps up every now and then
Thoughts of his honesty and all that has been
Digested and framed since he went away
Days that I miss...when he would say,
"Leave her alone, Kate", the girls got ginger
Comes from the genes...her piss and vinegar."
This was his answer when I'd get antsy
Shoot off my mouth extremely brave with a fancy
Curt verbage for females just wasn't the norm
Nor accepted ways for young girls to perform
But I was different...always had My view
I was important and somehow I knew
That my thoughts made a difference
Adult folks would "head up!"
To bend an ear closer to the voice of this pup
Wisdom and logic came easy for me
As dad and my elders were wise too you see
They passed on to me the knowledge of age
It came rather quick for this solid young babe
I knew I was other than norm...a winner
Full of table-top logic ... piss and vinegar
I was head sis of eight and wiser than most
No childhood for me but my honor would boast
The sense of a woman and the face of a kid
Decisions were nothing for me as it did
Come about easy with dedicated trust
From loins of the Dutch and free wonderlust
I was a princess..all soft and tender
Except when my rebel side
Spewed out piss and vinegar!




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 Reviews of "Piss and Vinegar"
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
Well it certainly sounds as if you had your hands full growing up and you excelled marvelously, definately my kind of girl. Great poem/story, thank you.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
My kind of girl.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
This is a cracker, its written from within and done so very well indeed...take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
This is strong and powerful nothing wrong with the rebel in us just long as it escapes from time to time again... Always good to stand up./....
Peace~
LP

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
seems to say, i wasn't pushed around even though i'm was a princess burdened with the responsibilities of life ...
emotively powerful poem!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
I truly love this poem, you had a wise father and it's good to have a spunky side!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
heheheh love the "piss and vinegar" part...sounds like me if I get upset!!

Reminded me of my grandma who always wanted to drown me in her "Pisspot"...you know the one under the bed.....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Unique title and outstanding story/poetry, Susan!!!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
excellent title, good prose and a nice tribute to a parent who realized the value of a little piss n vinegar

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
What a title! This spectacular write is 'spiced' beyond imagination ... superb!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Piss and Vinegar - Marvelous!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Your title,were my mother-in-laws favorite words;-)This is another excellent semi/bio poem Susan! Somehow,I knew you had that in you;-)
Onward and upward!;-)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Two essential ingredients, I must say. When sugar & spice or snips & snails aren't up to the task, piss & vinegar will get you through the day!

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
(((susan)))

LOL--we all have those moments of piss and vinegar

enjoyed the honesty in this one--well done, perfect meter and rhyme!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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