This may explain the girl in me who comes up now and then...the rebel part!
~SKdeV~
Dad's voice creeps up every now and then
Thoughts of his honesty and all that has been
Digested and framed since he went away
Days that I miss...when he would say,
"Leave her alone, Kate", the girls got ginger
Comes from the genes...her piss and vinegar."
This was his answer when I'd get antsy
Shoot off my mouth extremely brave with a fancy
Curt verbage for females just wasn't the norm
Nor accepted ways for young girls to perform
But I was different...always had My view
I was important and somehow I knew
That my thoughts made a difference
Adult folks would "head up!"
To bend an ear closer to the voice of this pup
Wisdom and logic came easy for me
As dad and my elders were wise too you see
They passed on to me the knowledge of age
It came rather quick for this solid young babe
I knew I was other than norm...a winner
Full of table-top logic ... piss and vinegar
I was head sis of eight and wiser than most
No childhood for me but my honor would boast
The sense of a woman and the face of a kid
Decisions were nothing for me as it did
Come about easy with dedicated trust
From loins of the Dutch and free wonderlust
I was a princess..all soft and tender
Except when my rebel side
Spewed out piss and vinegar!
Well it certainly sounds as if you had your hands full growing up and you excelled marvelously, definately my kind of girl. Great poem/story, thank you.
This is a cracker, its written from within and done so very well indeed...take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
This is strong and powerful nothing wrong with the rebel in us just long as it escapes from time to time again... Always good to stand up./....
Peace~
LP
Your title,were my mother-in-laws favorite words;-)This is another excellent semi/bio poem Susan! Somehow,I knew you had that in you;-)
Onward and upward!;-)
It's almost Christmas. Lynn Basil is writing her last book about a secret entrance into the magical doll land of Sha Bebe that she loves so much. Bagannos have taken over the world! Lynn finally meets her dolls in real life. Can she write in a Secret
JC xoxoxo
Peace~
LP
emotively powerful poem!
Reminded me of my grandma who always wanted to drown me in her "Pisspot"...you know the one under the bed.....lol!!
Love Tinka
Onward and upward!;-)
LOL--we all have those moments of piss and vinegar
enjoyed the honesty in this one--well done, perfect meter and rhyme!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)