"You can't stop the waves but you can learn to surf," said the profit to the throng
"You can run life's gamut freely, just trying to belong
You can make the world much richer , just stop to smell the flowers
Then toss aside your umbrella for early morning showers
Catch the smile of a youngster and give them one right back
Be positive with each heartbeat then you will never lack
The earth is a gift from God, endear it as your own
Pick up the ugly, scarring trash and beautify our home
Welcome every morning , that's what life's about
Taste your words in battle, before you spit them out
These are just a smidgeon of a dear shaman's advice
Just make it your vow to God ,don't think about it twice"
In all the gifts my father gave the values are right here
These are practiced daily for all my life long years."
A nice view of thought on the wisdom of one who understands and knows how to apply it...nice...
Art Sun...
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2006
Beautiful insight through the eyes of wisdom... I only wish the entire world could receive the benefit of this, the gift of a shaman father. Excellent write!
~Butch
Wisdom in your words!
Your heart is pure!
I started tracking/following you dear writer of the unique pen~
Come to my corner of the den, I hope your heart is touched there as well~ When time allows~
Happy Wonderful Joyful Holidays to you and yours!
WArm HuGs,Sheee
I never knew my real father, but I can't help thinking how much better a person I would be if I did. A good father's advice is truly that of a shaman. Love, Pierre
Wise words indeed. How lucky you are to have such a father!
How lucky he is to have such a daughter!! Have a wonderful holiday season and a happy, happy New Year, 'Pea' <3
"Taste your words in battle, before you spit them out" Perhaps the wisest of words here in this insightful and clearly stated poem. Very nice.
Take care,
Sherry
To quote or paraphrase an old TV show that was popular when I was a child...
"Father Knows Best", and this poem of your heartfelt lessons learned exemplifies this.
Fee
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
If your poems have anything to do with your fathers advice then he did well.Excellent work.
Merry Christmas!
Michael
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
Your father did the right thing. It is the values of life that count. Great poem. Victor
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
Your father gave you special insight, that is damn sure, and you know how to "get the word out," as it were. You Rock!
Great poetic write in both meter and rhyme and substance.
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
Thank you dearest precious Susan for this advice..Your Native line is beautiful..Your the rainbow and I can see why now...I am so proud to be a part of the red man culture, knowing God loves me, it carries no sin and I am proud and I love my natives, especialy my elders..
Art Sun...
~Butch
Ron
Thanks for sharing "Susan ' Daddy!!
Love Tinka
blessings
Paul;-)
Your heart is pure!
I started tracking/following you dear writer of the unique pen~
Come to my corner of the den, I hope your heart is touched there as well~ When time allows~
Happy Wonderful Joyful Holidays to you and yours!
WArm HuGs,Sheee
How lucky he is to have such a daughter!! Have a wonderful holiday season and a happy, happy New Year, 'Pea' <3
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Take care,
Sherry
"Father Knows Best", and this poem of your heartfelt lessons learned exemplifies this.
Fee
Merry Christmas!
Michael
In Spirit,
Dove
Aberjhani