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Rain's Passion
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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rain keeps coming from volumes of clouds
it trickles and cools down my passions that pound
then just when I think I'm all calm and collected
the thunder resounds and I'm feeling neglected
i need the rain and the touch of my man
i crave the chill that warms with his hands
my tingles go up and then all back down
then passions are wakened that push and then pound
heavier the cadense merges with thunder
then body's take refuge within one another
the fired up reality ... that comes and then grows
keeps budding the nipples and curling my toes
the fever of flesh and the rosier tones
they prick each nerve with a sip and a moan
the whispers that breath upon moistened skin
when floodgates are opened and love rushes in
its the passion of storms that call upon lovers
who roll with the thunder and move under covers
its needing the pleasures that cadence with rain
it kisses our sorrow and loosens our pains
its flirting with these provocative powers
the hot love of you and me and the showers
its rhythms much faster then kisses all over
its wet things that lick in places that smother
its hugging and bonding in lightning's rebound
its loving hot passions that don't touch the ground
when nature performs and passions do too
its me needing love from no one but you.

© 2007 Susan Kathryn de Vegter



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 Reviews of "Rain's Passion"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Must be pouring where you are Susan...nice work on this poetic display of rain mixed with passion....sensuality....and more rain...

nice.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Absolutely a beautiful write
Awesome picture
Thank you Susan
For this wonderful offering

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
No one can match your rhyme and rhythm when you write like this Susan. Or your passion;-)!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Passion personified.

Ron

Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...beautiful, Susan, let it rain, let it RAIN!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Seems the passion has more power than the storm. Great pen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
The power of the storm and the power of passion: great contrast, wonderful imagery. Victor

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
This evokes the vision of steam rising from a hot Georgia road after a thunderstorm. Lovely.

Walt

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
I love the rain on my face and my nakedness!
Sensual write, thank you for sharing and getting my mind going!

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
wonderful write here, a keeper. Lady J

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
Oh Susan...this is very sensual and such hot steamy passion, yet gentle as sweet as the soft summer rain can be as well. Love this one sweetie.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
Oh hells bells, Making love out in a storm would be bliss and kinda exciting..
The speed and the form of the rhyme and metre, is always so amazing.
Fun, fun, fun oh thunderous one..

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 31, 2007
Such electricity without a shock > Such a rainbow after a storm - {Such beauty} -love * { <Ted>}


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