"We are born helpless. As soon as we are fully conscious we discover loneliness. We need others physically, emotionally, intellectually: we need them if we are to know anything, even ouselves."
-C.S. Lewis
If I were to kiss the palms of his hands
Pour oils as sweet as nectar to soothe his pines
If I were to kiss his fingertips then trace a line to his palms
Caress them to my cheek where they belong
If I were to take his hands in rhythmic yearning
Press to my breast to ease his fitful burning
Then press my lips to his lonesome mouth
T'would ease the more his sad and turned down pout.
A heart as caring and compassionate as yours deserves all the appreciation in the world, and rarely receives it. I appreciate You!
This poem to me speaks of a woman's true appreciation of a man.
Love, Pierre
so very true are your words, and beautiful as well
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2007
I agree with Broome, which is a rarity for me. You need to start a new woman's movement. One which celevrates the differences between the sexes rather than screaming insults at them.
I've nominated you to head a new movement within the woman population. Your assignment; to teach all women, using your poetry... starting with this one. Methinks your doing this would make life so much better for both sides. How wonderfully you describe the problem and supply the answers. Now, what can I do for you?
- Bill
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
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This poem to me speaks of a woman's true appreciation of a man.
Love, Pierre
enjoyable write Susan
Love & Peace be with you
William
- Bill