I always want the impossible
To climb the highest tree
I always want what I can't have
And it all seems to me
The higher up you place your needs
The better off you'll get
The Enigma of your dreams can come
Then you're home free and yet
Had you settled for second place
You're apt to slowly find
That when you cheat yourself of needs
You leave yourself behind.
excellent, as you are~ not all, perhpas can do this, easily, but, you show, within your work and your comments, also ;-)
what is within this wise piece, well written and another proof of how you achieve the 'higher up'...and you do!
((Susan))
your work and all the above shine through with what this poem advises!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Yep you are wise! I agree.....Oh and I adore that picture! I reach for the stars...For if I fall the clouds are soft ;)
The treasure of life is not found in the belief that settling for less than what the heart desires would be satisfying...it is in always doing our utmost to reach for the stars.
Amor
Some thoughtful replies here to a good poem. Now, if I had some talent to get my website to work, I would be a happy man.
Peace,
Cherokee
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Everyone has a need to excel. It's the expanding of the ten talents given.
Be embarrassed to go home to my creator if I didn't use mine. Being the best we can be is the gift you give in a realationship too.
Thoughtful poem, Susan. Enjoyed reading it.
Susan,
I am cheering, this is soooooo true! When I was in class for my IET training, our teacher had us make out a list of all our goals in life, no matter how unattainable they may seem, the bigger the better! If we truly desire, it is possible!
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
ok i bad apple as always for I never set my sights too high for fear of failing to accomplish i dont mind second place for at least i know i tried my harddest to get it. But this was a very inspirational and awesome poem for others great job on it
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Very true
thoughts close to my heart
well written
sticks to its purpose and does it well
YES! There is such a thing as a winner, no matter what certain school systems teach in this country. I mean who ever heard of a ball game without keeping score. It happens these days. Sory about the rant. Great poem, Susan.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
Susan profound and excellent
"That when you cheat yourself of needs
You leave yourself behind. "
Love n Peace
Peg
Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
This is so very true
Excellent write!
huggs
Lady G.
A scientist/philosopher explores the mysteries of existence in a highly personal quest for answers to life's ultimate questions, forging a bridge between sterile science and spiritual values -- a scholarly work for all who seek wisdom, truth, true fr
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
Its a strange place to go, New Orleans.
To get philosophical.
How is philosophise in the art world doing?.
Morchuis
what is within this wise piece, well written and another proof of how you achieve the 'higher up'...and you do!
((Susan))
your work and all the above shine through with what this poem advises!
Amor
Peace,
Cherokee
Be embarrassed to go home to my creator if I didn't use mine. Being the best we can be is the gift you give in a realationship too.
Thoughtful poem, Susan. Enjoyed reading it.
~E
I am cheering, this is soooooo true! When I was in class for my IET training, our teacher had us make out a list of all our goals in life, no matter how unattainable they may seem, the bigger the better! If we truly desire, it is possible!
Hugs,
Maria
thoughts close to my heart
well written
sticks to its purpose and does it well
"That when you cheat yourself of needs
You leave yourself behind. "
Love n Peace
Peg
Excellent write!
huggs
Lady G.
One must aim high, or stay behind,
Well Penned
William
Jack