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Little Baby
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My dad left me to fight for myself in this cruel world, I almost drown!


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I'm going to be quite candid,
as a baby I was left stranded.
My father deserted his responsibilities,
many years I suffered many hostilities.
Still I grew positive in attitude,
and to this day I have strong fortitude.


Mom did the best she could,
but seems like dad never understood,
little babies also need a father,
still he never did bother.
Even though little baby is grown,
he still misses a father never known.


The tears have dried up,
yet the feeling is still corrupt.
Time is suppose to heal,
but I still choke on the pill.
Yesterday seems so far away,
dad I'd still like to hear your say.


Why?


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 Reviews of "Little Baby"
Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
i feel the same way grady, but my dad died and i never had a chance to find out...i hope you do

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
It is this time of year when these things are felt most Grady!
nothing said can make it better, I hope you find the solution you seek one day, but you may wish you hadn't. I pray you have a blessed and joyous Christmas and year to come! Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
I am reminded of this whenever I see a child that has been abandoned with his mother. Sometimes although it does not make sense to you there is a real reason. Sometimes with some of the fathers that I have seen it was a kindness that they did leave. Trust me I know too many men like that. But perhaps someday you will have the answer.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
Very heartfelt poem Grady!!

Merry Christmas to you my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
An extremely honest and heartfelt write, Grady. Hope you find peace in your heart and the answers you seek.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
This is a crushing poem, Grady. I don't understand how a father could walk away from his children and never look back. I don't think wounds like these ever heal. It is strange that thread that binds you to your father, even though you have never known him. It is unfair that your life should be scarred by his lack of responsibility.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on December 23, 2004
Grady:

This one moves me a lot. Sometimes the adults do the things that baby don't understand. Unless you forgive your father for doing so, you will always have tears. First take all the resentments our of your heart, think that whatever he did was under special circumstance that perhaps was just good for both you and your mother at the time. Then look for him. Your mother should not try to stop you from looking him up.

Good luck with your search!

Sandie May Angel :o)

P.S. I was away from my parents between 2 - 7 years old. Just living with my grandparents on my mother's side; but after I came back to live with my parents, I have no resentments toward my dad. He did not come to see me in the hospital when I was born. ~ SA ~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2004
This has me in floods: How can a father do that. Just hope my son does not think this of me...

Reviewed on December 23, 2004
G, Powerful write!!!

...Michael


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